Date: 12/20/2016 02:01 PM Title: Chapter 28
This was brilliant. Looking forward to the rest of the series
Date: 09/08/2012 09:20 AM Title: Chapter 28
What a wonderful story. Continue writing you obviously have a gift! Thank you for sharing it.
Author's Response: thank you for the lovely compliments> The next stories are already being worked on...
Date: 09/07/2012 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
Darling, this is fantastic. Lovely read.
Author's Response: thank you very much, I am glad you enjoyed. The very last chapter will be going up tonight
Date: 08/26/2012 02:30 PM Title: Chapter 27
First of all I have to say: I love the banner.
Second: I love this chapter. They finally found their peace and happyness.
And finally third: You don't need to apologize! Sometimes words don't come so easily, so take your time! Even though I can't wait for the epilogue! LoL
PS: Are you going to write a little story about domnas and libeth? I really like that couple.
Author's Response: The banner is a master piece from AnneM, and it is amazing... glad you enjoyed the chapter. I re-wrote quite a few times to get it right, I needed to reflect all the pomp but make it personal to them as well. Domnas and Libeth will turn up in other stories, here and there, there are no plans for a seperate story yet, but you never know
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2012 02:48 PM Title: Chapter 27
As I read through the ceremony I had that tingle where all your hair rises on your arms, and follows a path up your spine sparking every hair on your scalp. It is delightful that your words manifest in the physical.
It was beautiful, and I loved the innocent confusion of the young couple (Tiarsi & Menwar) in love. *sigh* And, the forcefulness of a man in love willing to honor and protect his treasured.
Just picturing Domnas shift to dragon, how glorious!
Thank you for sharing~Elou
Author's Response: and thank you for reviewing, I'm glad that the three different couples felt different. That's what I was aiming for
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2012 02:16 PM Title: Chapter 27
Great tale. so glad you updated. the muse is forgiven. :)
Author's Response: thank you, just an epilogue to go now
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
So exciting! I had held my breath without even noticing. *giggle* Silly of me, but I was so drawn in. The pace was so quick, until it came to a standstil. When they saw one another again. So lovely.
Thank you, thank you. I know that your cup runneth over with responsibility right now. I appreciate the update. It is beautiful, and leaves me with a warm feeling. I only hope that things go wonderfully for you and yours as well~Elou
Author's Response: Just realised that I hadn't replied.... Glad you appreciated the pacing,... and so pleased you enjoyed it... the next chapter is up
Date: 05/20/2012 05:54 AM Title: Chapter 26
I need an update for this story ASAP. So lovely and full of imagination. You really know how to create a world and I'm positively losing myself in it.
Thank you so much for sharing your gift of bringing fantasy to life!
Author's Response: trying to work on this one desperately. There are only one or two more chapters to go.. and they won't 'come'
Date: 01/21/2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh it's almost time. So exciting! *giggle* I can't wait! Finally all of Thewlin's self douts will be put to rest, and their loved confirmed and shared.
Thank you, thank you~Elou
Author's Response: and thank you for reviewing... this chapter seemed to take forever to form. I tried and tried, and think delete got used more than save...
Date: 01/21/2012 08:16 AM Title: Chapter 26
awesome chapter, well worth the wait. *gets tissues ready* I always cry at weddings
Author's Response: thank you so much, Shadow...glad you enjoyed it
[Report This]Date: 01/19/2012 03:27 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter! I loved the part at the end where Thewlin waited for Nerola. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
Author's Response: ty glad you enjoyed it
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2011 07:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter! I could only imagine what look Thewlin had on his face when he saw the Dragon transformed into a woman! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the review. they rally mean a lot to me
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2011 06:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter! I loved how easily Kaylon accepted Thewlin into his family. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
Author's Response: glad you liked it... Kay was just grateful she was alive, being loved was a bonus..he's seen her alone for a long long time
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2011 05:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
Excellent chapter! It was certainly a surprise to find out Nerola is the King's sister. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
Author's Response: there is even more to her than that :) hope you enjoy the rest
Date: 11/23/2011 05:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a great start to the story! Poor Nerola has to deal with Morgan like that. At least Thewlin is there to help her out. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
Author's Response: thank you for your indulgence, and reviewing
[Report This]Date: 11/16/2011 06:55 AM Title: Chapter 24
I love when the tention of the story seizes me, and I ride along with them. Then the happy release of said tention (and my breath) *giggle* , then all is right with the world with Nerola in Thewlins arms.
It never ceases to amaze me how people still judge one another on first appearances. I myself am used to seeing someones countenance fall to something of sadness when they give me the first look over. If they bothered to look beyond the external they would see so much more, and many of things that I am grateful for.
As always, I have enjoyed every bit of it. Mmm hmm!
Thank you for sharing~Elou
Author's Response: thank you so much for the review, I must admit it was a relief to see it, the first one for this chapter (No long weekend in the UK, so i wondered where everyone had gone to.) I know what you mean about judging people by their looks...to so many I equal a middle aged housewife with no outside interests..if only they knew :)
[Report This]Date: 10/15/2011 06:06 PM Title: Chapter 23
I would much rather feed your passionate soul, than add anything to your hips if you promise me the same. I saw my rear the other day. Aye carrumba. It looks like I have skipped a few meals...*giggle*
If I could only convey just how much I have enjoyed this, than I would. But alas, it's hard to put onto paper (okay, screen..print..you know) a feeling that wells within you and spreads serenity. It's almost as if once you step "in" that you are lead through the story itself. It's a beautiful feeling. Even during turmoil and despair there is hope.
Lovely.
Thank you for sharing, and I look forward to more~Elou
Author's Response: my hips look like I have never skipped a meal in my life. i have lost 50lb and another 50 to go. This story is so very close to my heart, the seven sisters have wandered around my head for years, and to finally get their tales written is lovely.. Your review is so wonderfu, it simply makes me want to write more and more...when this one is finihed, I'm going to publish it on lulu, make it into a real book...
Date: 09/16/2011 08:46 PM Title: Chapter 23
i am continually surprised with this story. each chapter sucks me in and i get lost in this world that you have created.
again, a masterpiece. please keep it up, i am addicted to this tale
Author's Response: thank you so much. I am plotting out the next chapter at the moment, but my muse wants me to play with a prequal to Karma..ho hum, have to keep the muse happy or she sulks. I must admit i lust after Thewlin, Nerola is a lucky lady..more as soon as I can.
[Report This]Date: 08/23/2011 01:59 PM Title: Chapter 21
My goodness. Forgiveness is sometimes more a gift to the giver, than the receiver. I wish I could grasp onto that at times. *sigh*
Beautifully done. The visuals you conjure with your story are breathtaking in my minds eye. You manage to feed my imagination splendidly.
I look forward to reading more.
I apologize for not commenting after every chapter, some leave me emotionally obliterated. Sorry.
I'll be patient, and wait for more.
Thank you again, well done~Elou
Author's Response: the next chapter is winging its way to Bunnyhops as we speak. Forgiveness is a hard one to grasp, we try so hard at times, but it really is a divine gift.... Over the years there will be another 6 stories in this series and when this one is finished I intend to have it published on LULU
Date: 08/23/2011 01:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bawling again.. This seems to be a trend with you and I. *giggle*
Thank you again~Elou
Author's Response: lol, glad you are enjoying it...more waiting for you
[Report This]Date: 08/23/2011 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
Aww. Tears. You've made me leak again woman...*giggle*
Beautifully written.
Thank you for sharing~Elou
[Report This]Date: 08/23/2011 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 14
A good lesson to learn young, or at any age come to think of it. Many feel I am too hard on our girls. My only wish is to love them, impart them knowledge, and teach them responsibilty.
There is no shame in pride over a task well done.
The effect she has had over the keep is amazing. The "all is right with the world" feeling is a wonderful one.
Thank you again for sharing the lovely chapter~Elou
Author's Response: Thank you. my eldest girl has just got engaged, she's young but she knows her own mind and works hard at anything she tries. I have no doubt she will work hard at her marriage as well. I've been told I'm too tough on my kids, but they are happy, respectful, intelligent and diligent. I must have done something right
[Report This]Date: 08/23/2011 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
That was most definitely very saucy.
Mmm hmm. *giggle*
What a radiantly HOT scene! Whew! *fans self*
Thank you for sharing~Elou
Author's Response: as long as it was hot enough. I wan the passion between these two to leap off the page
Date: 08/23/2011 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 12
That made me cry. Just a surge of grief swelled in me at the thought of tormenting a child, any child. What a wonder, and delight your writing expresses in the loving protectiveness of your Nerola.
Than you for sharing this. I bound onward~Elou
Author's Response: Hurray you found me :) glad you are enjoying this tale..it really is my 'baby' and thank you for your kind words
[Report This]Date: 07/06/2011 02:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
the more I read of this tale,the more I like it.
I look forward to updates with alacrity.
Author's Response: thank you so much..this story is precious to me...