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Reviewer: wiccakitty Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2011 02:01 PM Title: Chapter 19

Im really enoying this story.been looking forward to un update.



Author's Response: working on it now..hope you like it when it arrives

Reviewer: Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2011 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 18

I've said it before, and I'll say it again... I want a dragon.  *Stamps foot*

That kid, Dom, so damned lucky!

Methinks Nerola would be best to keep Thewlin and Moreth from spending time alone  *grin*

Cant wait to see them in Lyness.... *pokes*

 

More?!



Author's Response: lol, Moreth and Thewlin talking = someone sleeping on the sofa me thinks..... onto Lyness, yes ma'am

Author's Response: lol, Moreth and Thewlin talking = someone sleeping on the sofa me thinks..... onto Lyness, yes ma'am

Reviewer: wiccakitty Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2011 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 18

another great chapter.Im really enjoying this story.thanks for writing it.



Author's Response: thank you , glad you are enjoying it...it really is my baby..

Reviewer: wiccakitty Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2011 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 17

Another super chapter,can't wait for it to be in book form from Lulu.



Author's Response: thank you. I have asked a friend of my daughter's to draw me a pic for the cover....

Reviewer: Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2011 08:09 AM Title: Chapter 17

Me wants a dragon.... *grin*

I love the mental imagine of the small boy challenging the large dragon with a wooden sword, puts a smile on my face.

And the mental image of Tewlin gaping like a fish when his mother-in-law's age is laid out to him... *snicker*

 

AWESOME CHAPTER!

 

 



Author's Response: thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it, and yes...poor Thewlin

Reviewer: wiccakitty Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2011 01:38 PM Title: Chapter 16

really great story,gets better with each chapter.



Author's Response: thank you..glad you are enjoying and THank you so much for the review, they mean the world to me...

Reviewer: Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2011 08:35 AM Title: Chapter 16

I can so see Thelin going crackers when its Nerola's time... poor man.

 

Love the baby's name  *grin*

 

MORE!  *stamps foot*



Author's Response: phew, it worked..glad you enjoy. More as soon as I can and thank you for all the support

Author's Response: phew, it worked..glad you enjoy. More as soon as I can and thank you for all the support

Reviewer: Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2011 01:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

awww... can I cry....?

 

Poor Domnas... haveing to wait 5 years for his lady.. *sniff*

Lovely bonding ceremony, with the braclet and her kneeling... *sniff*

 

Yup... gonna cry... *waaaaaah*

 

*sniff*  more please?



Author's Response: lol, ohh, I made you cry :) glad you enjoyed and I can't see him actually waiting five years....

Reviewer: wiccakitty Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2011 08:18 AM Title: Chapter 14

very good-as always.will you publish all seven tales on Lulu?



Author's Response: that's the plan..eventually...I want to be able to read them away from a computer... thanks for the review

Reviewer: Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2011 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

awww.... poor boy... he's still having trouble wrapping his head around how affluent his wife is....

 

good for Libeth, learning is living  *Grin* or is that the other way round?  *shrug*

 

MORE!



Author's Response: i don;t think he will ever quite get it... Libeth will learn, she's only young... thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: wiccakitty Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2011 03:11 PM Title: Chapter 13

have read loads of chapters of this tale,its really amazingly great.,so glad I have caught up! more please...thankyou.



Author's Response: thank you so much for reviewing...and glad you enjoyed it. More as soon as I can.

Reviewer: Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2011 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 13

Toldja I didnt wanna piss off Nerola...

 

Libeth might learn yet... we'll see

 

hot smut... mmmm hot smut!



Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it... more as soon as I can

Reviewer: Shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2011 01:20 PM Title: Chapter 12

Holy Fireballs Batman!

1 - Thewlin has got one steep learning curve.  He went from poor boy, to slave, to servant, to lord of the manor.... AND married....  he's bound to screw up often.  Good thing his wife is so understanding....

2 - I do not want to piss his wife off... no way no how...

 

dare I ask.... more?



Author's Response: more as soon as I can...and thanks for all the reviews

Reviewer: Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2011 03:38 PM Title: Chapter 11

wowsers... awesome update!

 

Glad to see the blacksmith and his family are doing well, a credit to Cyanea.

 

Thewlin put his foot in it again didnt he... poor boy, but he will learn!

 

more please?



Author's Response: trying to work on more, honest glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2011 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

mmm Weapons... Dragons...

 

Love it... honestly love it.  Can hardly wait for more!



Author's Response: thank you, glad it is still working for you...

Reviewer: Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2011 02:40 PM Title: Chapter 9

Awesome...

poor Thewlin, feeling out of his depth and wondering if he's gonna drown!

 

HOT SMUT!  wooties!

 

More?

 



Author's Response: glad you enjoyed, and that it is coming across as i wanted it to.. more soon..promise

Reviewer: Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2011 01:24 PM Title: Chapter 8

WOOT!  Morgan got what was coming to him!  Love it... love it to bits!

 

Glad to see Thewlin is sorta-of settling into his new life... its been one shock after another for the poor man.

 

More?



Author's Response: glad you enjoyed, more as soon as i can, honest...I'm not holding it to ransome

Reviewer: Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2011 03:45 AM Title: Chapter 7

What a way to make a man eat his words (and his stupidity).  At least he learned (if only the hard way).

 

Awesome story.  Cant wait for more.



Author's Response: really pleased you liked it...and yes, he'll get Indigestion from this...at least he worked it out for himself

Reviewer: Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2011 03:26 PM Title: Chapter 6

Thewlin is gonna need surgery to remove that foot from his mouth...

 

Awesome chapter.  And just what I needed this morning.



Author's Response: I think you may be right, poor man.... glad it helped

Reviewer: Shortcake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2011 01:26 AM Title: Chapter 6

Dam you and back stories that tease! I'm simply in lurve with your angsty muse, is he by any chance 6'2, with broad shoulders, who growls when he's about to kiss you(or give you an idea) and was sorted into Slytherin?

I swear there is fan art in here somwhere....if only i had a complete character list and short bio....LOL most likely after the series. Thank goodness this is going on lulu (I heard rumours...alright mainly musings from you..) well mostly I thank goodness that I'm geek enough to know what that is, and how to ask my dad to show me how to format. Being the daughter of a former IT guy sooooo has its perks.

Cant wait for the next chapter



Author's Response: i love the idea of the art work...and wish i was that good with computers. next chapter should be off to the betas tomorrow thanks for the review, they really do make my day

Author's Response: i love the idea of the art work...and wish i was that good with computers. next chapter should be off to the betas tomorrow thanks for the review, they really do make my day

Reviewer: Shortcake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2011 09:17 PM Title: Chapter 5

Well, as the saying goes "people fear what they dont know" but at least Thewlin is starting to try and understand why nea needs so many lovers to repleninsh her energy, it will take awhile but I'm sure he'll get there. He did have a valid concern about power abuse.

What I really truly want is indigo and Nea's back story ! *stamps foot*  Please? I am such a sucker for a tragicly jilted lover story, it fills that 16 year old angsy part of my heart when glee is in re-runs....

Love the chapter cant wait for the next one, I hope this has given you your review fix :)



Author's Response: review fix taken, thank you... there will be all seven girls stories done eventually....including Indi's and Nea's.... glad you enjoyed and next chapter is with Bunnyhops as I type this

Reviewer: Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2011 08:58 AM Title: Chapter 5

Master Thewlin is a jerk.  Plain and simple.  Judging before he knows ALL the facts.  *Shakes head*  MEN... I swear... idiots the lot of them.

 

Dare I say it?  More?  Please?



Author's Response: well, I couldn't make him too perfect could i? he wouldn't be a man. And thewlin is all man...including those wonderful moments when you want to strangle them.... working on more, but could I please have some Haakon?

Author's Response: well, I couldn't make him too perfect could i? he wouldn't be a man. And thewlin is all man...including those wonderful moments when you want to strangle them.... working on more, but could I please have some Haakon?

Reviewer: Shortcake Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2011 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 4

LOL, sex magic, threesomes, shapeshifiting, and backstories galore! Rock on! I'm loving Scarlet and her harem, though I bet Cyanea's is larger!. I got another email from you.....one might think that you dont trust me to check for updates and that you crave my feedback.....personally I think you are hoping I work for a major publishing house: the paranormal romance dept.  LOL

love this cant wait for the next chapter/email :)

 



Author's Response: me ? a review junkie? never !! lol you aren't an editor are you? no, that only happens in my dreams... next chapter should be up later today

Reviewer: Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2011 09:57 AM Title: Chapter 4

wow... turfing souls out of their bodies, women turning into dragons...

 

why do I get the impression that poor Thewlin is about to have his world view turned upside down and inside out?

 

MORE!

 



Author's Response: upside down, back to front and sideways,..Good job he loves her.

Reviewer: Shortcake Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2011 01:55 PM Title: Chapter 3

LOL anything to get me to review huh, an email and a cleverly written chapter *blusshes* awww shucks.

I really want to meet scarlett now :) I have a feeling shes a cross between hermoine and lara croft :) I also have a feeling that we are going to be meeting some other brother of the rainbow clan *snort* wonder who will fight with papa thelwin first?

Go midevil on morgans arse! Seriously like wrap him inwet leather strips and set himin the sun to bake so when the leather starts to dry it will constrict his air flow, break his ribs and cause internal bleeding, oh and have dogs pee on him , children throw stones and adults yell at him and kick him!

Dang it....youve got me hooked again......:P



Author's Response: you know I'm a review whore... Scarlet is on her way, along with a couple of 'friends' Morgan will suffer, and for a long long time... glad you enjoyed and more as soon as I can

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