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Reviewer: Elou Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2012 09:43 AM Title: Chapter 5

I am sorry I waited so long to read your update.  Life has been hectic, I'm sure as you well know yourself.  But still you find time to let your soul carry its musings to life.
Thank you. 

I'm glad I waited until I was alone to read it.  It afforded me a good cry in seclusion.  
It amazes me how the feelings of self doubt has tainted these two beautifully written characters.

Thank you for sharing, I look forward to see how Violetta comes along. Or is it too late?
~Elou



Author's Response: you know me and happy endings :) The second sentence of you review made me smile.. your life is hectic.. you have the energy for hectic.. that is so wonderful....I'm glad you are enjoying the story, and hopefully more very soon

Author's Response: you know me and happy endings :) The second sentence of you review made me smile.. your life is hectic.. you have the energy for hectic.. that is so wonderful....I'm glad you are enjoying the story, and hopefully more very soon

Reviewer: Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2012 08:20 AM Title: Chapter 5

great chapter, hot and steamy... but oh the misunderstandings and tiptoeing and crossed wires... I hope it gets sorted out quickly!

 



Author's Response: working on that at the moment... hehehe

Reviewer: wiccakitty Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2012 09:10 AM Title: Chapter 5

poor violetta! what a coil. I hope it all resolves itself. great chapter. :O)



Author's Response: you know me and happy endings :) thanks for the review

Reviewer: wiccakitty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2012 08:29 AM Title: Chapter 4

another great chapter.I hope they get together soon. :o)



Author's Response: very soon... thank you so much for the review

Reviewer: Malfoymaiden Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 03:11 PM Title: Chapter 4

AWESOME!!!



Author's Response: thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: Elou Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2012 09:53 PM Title: Chapter 3

There is quite the connection between them, and a rising need as well.  I look forward to see how the line is drawn in the sand, and then the conditions it is crossed.  Has Edmund already laid his path? *giggle* I look forward to the next chapter with many questions rattling about in my head. 
Lovely, indeed.
Thank you for sharing~Elou



Author's Response: I think you are the only one to pick up on Edmund's comment :) ask the question... they should get answered in the story...

Reviewer: Elou Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2012 09:22 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love to savor every bit.  So rich, and detailed. The evolving relationship between them is sweet.  Watching him slowly come to trust her is wonderful.
Thank you dear, thank you for sharing~Elou



Author's Response: thank you so much for the comments. I love working on this one, Violetta is such a delicate character to write, but so strong as well... And MAgnar is a dream....

Reviewer: wiccakitty Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2012 01:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

Another great chapter. I'm really enjoying this tale. :O)



Author's Response: thank you so much...Working on the next chapter at the moment

Reviewer: wiccakitty Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2012 03:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

another great chapter. I like Mindy the dog-she must be a huge beast to be able to pull a cart!



Author's Response: there is a lovely test for dog carts, the cart is pullable, with one finger, by a 7 year old boy. The dog can't be stopped by 2 or 3 full grown men! http://www.midland-bernese-carters.org.uk/ the dogs are walking carpets and as gentle as can be. glad you enjoyed the chapter, new one in a few days, hopefully

Reviewer: Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2011 07:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

This just keeps getting better and better!  Cant wait for more!



Author's Response: thank you, glad you liked it

Reviewer: Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2011 07:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome!  You need to publish this! 



Author's Response: one day :) the plan is to finish the whole of the daughters series and have them published thank you for the review

Reviewer: Elou Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2011 06:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my, another passion for me to indulge.  I truly love their world.  You make it bright, and wonderful.  I can't wait for more! A bit impatient? YES!  *giggle*
Thank you so much for sharing Vara.  I look forward to the next bit soon~Esther



Author's Response: next bit should be heading to bunnyhops as soon as possible...just need to tweak to match into chapter 3. Thank you so much for the review, glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: wiccakitty Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2011 06:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

 That was very good. I'm intrigued about the slave area,when they go to the 'Knackers' I presume its for those who have come to the end of their useful lives.

can't wait for more.



Author's Response: thank you so much for the review. Knackers used to dispose of unwanted horses and dogs at one time, the meat going to the hounds....

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