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Reviewer: maryperk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2011 05:53 AM Title: Chapter 19

ooooh, a certain painting is in TROUBLE!!!!!



Author's Response: lol, too right, if he's a painting

Reviewer: maryperk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2011 07:33 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great chapter, vara.



Author's Response: thankyou Mary, glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Wintersong Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2011 06:26 PM Title: Chapter 18

When I saw the link on GE I had to come over and boy am I glad I did!  This was a wonderful chapter.  I laughed myself silly over Narcissa.  I absolutely love her attitude and the way she's leading Lucius around by the short hairs.  And the foot-and-mouth disease... what a riot.  On the serious side I loved the way Dolph and Rab went to Hermione's parents.  That was very well done.  You bring so much extra into all your stories it's like painting a picture with words.  Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response: a lovley compliment, thank you. I loved writing Narcissa, she's a hoot and yes she should give the other pure blood wives lessons in how to husband tame more as soon as I can

Reviewer: Elou Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 18

I just love it when the girls get together and talk. *giggle* Muscle relaxer indeed! LOL

I feel for Lucius. She is definitely putting him through the wringer, and his 'gift'...bwahaha. Too much.

Aren't the brothers just wonderful. What a gift to present to the Grangers. Lovely.

Thank you again, for sharing~Elou



Author's Response: the muscle relaxant may well be needed..lol glad you enjoyed and yes I feel sorry for Lucius as well...but Narcissa knows what she's doing, I hope...evil laugh more as soon as I can

Reviewer: Sampdoria Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2011 03:48 PM Title: Chapter 18

Yuppi-di-di-da, I found  a new chapter to my favourite story. Fantastic update, Luna's comment about foot-and-mouth and young men almost made me fall out of the chair laughing. Your Narcissa is wonderful, and my love for the two LeStrange brothers is growing by the minute, the respect they show Hermiones parents are so nice to read and it adds even more deapths to your wonderful story. Thank you so much for submitting the chapter here, it made my day.



Author's Response: :) glad you enjoyed. As for the Lestranges, I always see pure blood culture as that, a culture with its own rules and standards...and enjoy reflecting that in my stories more as soon as I can and it will always be posted here first

Reviewer: lrmorena Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2011 08:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ah I found you here!!!!!!!!! Perfect!

Reviewer: readalot Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2011 07:03 PM Title: Chapter 18

Wow,it is worth the wait, another amazing chapter with a lots of explanation. Really like Narcissa on her ways to make Lucius grovel. Glad to know that Harry has a mild hex and foot and mouth disease (LOL).A+ chapter !



Author's Response: thank you. glad you enjoyed..more writing next week. Half term over thank goodness...no tv to disturb Narcissa is a wonderful teacher, one that could teach Hermione a few things that would help her in the future with 2 husbands to dwal with

Reviewer: Shortcake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2011 05:02 PM Title: Chapter 18

It is my professional opion as a reader of your work never to consume liquid when reading your dialouge. Case in point; Narcissa's gift Lucius had me scrambling for a towel to clean off my screen and keyboard. Though, completely worth it.....LOL sooooooo worth it!

I really think you should have Hermoine soothe Rodoplus's fears everytime he thinks he's mucked something up, the realtoinship is new gaffes are bound to be made when dealing with muggles be it the girl your courting or her parents. Dig the unicorn!

I agree with Luna that most men suffer from "foot in mouth disease" but I do wonder who cast that spell on Harry, Ron Is quite inept......though Molly and Ginny on the other hand..vindictiveness can be quite a motivator.

Cant wait for the next chapter!!!! Hoping Narcissa does get that Emrald necklace...LOL

 



Author's Response: LOL, I've been in trouble from a lot of people, sprayed cats and washed computers... Rodolphus will get his reassurance, don't worry. She loves them both and equally and as for the necklace, wait and see

Reviewer: Shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2011 03:32 PM Title: Chapter 18

My Unicorn!  *grin*

 

Swesome chapter.  Aint Narcissa a little schemeing blonde  *smirk*  love it!

 

wonder who cast the spell on Harry to make him always believe Ron... cause face it... Ron deosnt seem that smart.

 

 

More?



Author's Response: your unicorn :) and yes, Narcissa is a schemeing blonde. there will be more about the spell... more as soon as I can...I'm easily bribed, FA is a good start

Reviewer: black969902 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2011 02:54 PM Title: Chapter 18

I like Malfoy´s Wedding, I wish Hermione will choose that. And Luna is a crazy, crazy, crazy woman, two  Lestrange in a one hole!!!!

I´m from Argentina, sorry for my english. Kiss

 



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed. Thank you for taking the time to write in a language not your own. It is most kind of you. I think you might be right about the wedding

Reviewer: Ischtar Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2011 02:39 PM Title: Chapter 18

I have been waiting for this chapter eagerly, of course it does not disappoint. Narcissa shows fascinating aspects of her character - thank you. Ischtar



Author's Response: you are most welcome. Glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Shortcake Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2011 08:46 AM Title: Chapter 17

Antlers...lol classic! Hmmm what oh what did that idiot ginger do to Harry? What is he hiding? Wonder if this will get him more abuse at Azkaban? Yay for Remus!

LOL Sirius had a good point; no second war beacuse everyone would be trying to get into her knickers....oh my *has thought* Rodolphus and Rabastan at 25....oh the rakish-ness and Carpathian-like looks and neanderthal protective streak *shivers* ...that thought is so delicious it has to be fattening

I await untill next time, and so enjoy your work....hehe I'm starting to re-read "through the eyes of a child" when I need a good writing fix.



Author's Response: now that thought has been steaming...Rabastan and Rodolphus as good looking as Carpathians...(I'm re-reading Tempest's story at the moment) and that neanderthal protective streak..is rape always wrong? bother! it is isn't it... Never mind I can get them into bed with Hermione and I will very soon. Glad you are enjoying the writing.. please let me know what you think of the original....

Reviewer: Shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2011 05:39 PM Title: Chapter 17

So... Ron hides the book after reading about "stealing" a witches magic thru rape... but doesnt read it all... typical Ron...

 

Harry is an idiot... quoting Ron, interefering where not needed... the antlers were a nice touch.

 

I wonder... could Ron have hexed Harry?  hrmmmms.....

 

Lovely chapter... more please?



Author's Response: i'm holding the next chapter to ransom..you get more when i get some...hehehe glad you liked and thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Ischtar Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2011 01:42 PM Title: Chapter 17

The background knowledge shows. Rodolphus speaks Parseltongue, how come? Good chapter.

Ischtar



Author's Response: more on the parseltongue later....but glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: black969902 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2011 08:07 AM Title: Chapter 17

Harry, so stupid; Sirius lovely; Lestranges: oh my God.

And you really hates Ron, me too. Too much witch for a poor wizard.

J.K.Rowling I hate you too.



Author's Response: thank you, yep Harry is stupid and I did hate Ron, Hermione deserved better than him..there will be more Lestrange loving coming up..hope you enjoy that!

Reviewer: Ischtar Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2011 08:46 AM Title: Chapter 16

Well done!



Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: Shortcake Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2011 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 16

half..naked..slytherin..brothers...*gurgles blissfuly*

I know there should be more of a review like, how will remus and sverus react once they trio head downstairs, or how or when Hermoines going to fix it so lucius can get back into his wifes bed,or will cissa make him suffer a bit more. Yet as I have stated peviously ......

half ...naked....slytherin....brothers....*gurgles inchoherntly now but blissfully so*



Author's Response: that's about the limit of my mental ability at some points as well..Semi naked brothers....

Reviewer: Shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2011 02:16 PM Title: Chapter 16

can I borrow the brothers?  I need a massage.

 

Great chapter hun.  perfectly done.

 

cant wait for more



Author's Response: mine first, I get to play first

Reviewer: maryperk Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2011 01:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

good chappy.



Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: readalot Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2011 08:46 PM Title: Chapter 15

Oh my god, so excited to see a new update,love it! Am I bad if I want Dolp and Rab to suffer more then grovel? Glad that Hermione is getting some TLC . Another A+ chapter.



Author's Response: Dolph and Rab will suffer and they will pay more as soon as I can and thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Shortcake Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2011 07:27 PM Title: Chapter 15

Yay: a Maraduer sandwich! *giggles and squees*, and a snarky Snape getting the drop on Rab :P  I cant wait to see her get mad at them...and them grovel... and lol watch Oyster defend her mistress  kitten scratches on a big bad death eater is comical in my mind.

Hoping to watch Lucius get rebuffed as only a purblood man can in the next chapter , knowing Cissca she'll probably ask for documantation with two wittness signing it that state "L. Malfoy is has been a prat to one H.Granger and has apologized accordingly...So yes you can shag him again"

I swear if I was better at editing, spelling, content...hell take your pic; I'd ask to beta your next piece.



Author's Response: Yep, a marauder sandwich, oh to be the meat there.... there will be payback to certain brothers, hope you approve of it... more as soon as I can and thanks for the offer

Reviewer: Shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2011 06:00 PM Title: Chapter 15

awww... the brother's to the metaphorical rescue.... lucky for them Hermione is mostly asleep... seeing as she's still mad at them... *smirk*



Author's Response: she'll get her own back don't worry..glad you liked it and more as soon as I can. thanks Honehe

Reviewer: maryperk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2011 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 15

Awesome chappy, vara.



Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: Ischtar Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2011 04:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very gentle and soothing. Very well written. Thank you. Ischtar



Author's Response: you are more than welcome, thank you for reviewing

Reviewer: readalot Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2011 05:42 PM Title: Chapter 14

Hi ,glad to find that you have have a new site,I have the same user name on GE .just letting you know again A+ chapter, Will be waiting patiently for the next update.



Author's Response: updates will always be here first....as I validate the chapters myself. Luckily for the readership I don't beta them...lol thanks for following me over

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