[Report This]Date: 04/13/2011 03:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thank you so much for another wonderful update!!!! It was well worth waiting for, and I totally agree, you don't upset a brilliant beta, and author, like Bunnyhops:-))
The lemons were fantastic, the order meeting perfect, and the birth of Scorpius and Hermiones reaction to holding the newborn were icing on the cake.
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed..Bunnyhops cried cause there was no smut..so it had to be done.... more as soon as I can and thanks for the review
Date: 04/13/2011 02:14 PM Title: Chapter 22
Just BRILLANT!!!!!
Author's Response: thank you
Date: 04/13/2011 01:32 PM Title: Chapter 22
Hot Smut, wicked Smut... no upsetting the beta!
Now we shall see just how much of Molly's attitude was the spell... or her own idiocy? *Grin*
Love it... me wants more....Pwease?
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed..and no no upsetting the beta, they are just too hard to keep... glad you enjoyed it though more as soon as I can
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2011 03:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
I an so sorry, I misread the start of chapter 21, I now understand she was talking about leaving the Kit at Remus and Severus's. Sorry againt I apologise for my previous review.
Love the story, so sorry again,
Donavon, Best wishes to you and yours.
[Report This]Date: 03/23/2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 21
*laughs hystericaly* The Mafloys good at political spin...who'dah thunk? Maybe this will get Lucius back into Cissa knickers? *snicker* Oh the disbelife and outrage of Molly is going to be a beautiful sight to behold. I wonder if Harry can legaly change Albus Severus name?
Grand Chapter as always, cant wait to see the wolf pack come together as Remus said the next few months are going to be interesting. Poor Kinglsey...poor poor Kingsley.
I like how you summed up that manilplitive twonk "so he maniplitated everyon cause he couldnt get a leg over on the guy he wanted?" I have a feeling that might have been part of J.K's original character description of Albus *lol*
So yet again I wait with baited breath for the next installment, eager with anitcipation.
Author's Response: there is no Albus Seveus yet..Harry hasn't married Luna... glad you enjoyed the twists and turns and more as soon as I can
Date: 03/23/2011 04:15 PM Title: Chapter 21
I can't wait for the meeting! Wonderful chapter,as always.
Author's Response: thank you, meeting on its way
[Report This]Date: 03/23/2011 04:11 PM Title: Chapter 21
another excellent chapter.
Author's Response: thank you
[Report This]Date: 03/23/2011 03:02 PM Title: Chapter 21
Great story, BUT, please take care writing your plot.
You had the Kitten taken with Hermione when she fled, even attacking Severus!! Then nothing, until todays chapter when apparently Hermione finds that the Kit was okay even though she had left it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?
I cannot understand how that story fact as not been stopped via yourself or your beta's before uploading.
However, I still love your story.
Best wishes, Donavon.
Author's Response: Take care with your reading..Oyster was taken to Snape's house, and Hermione was worried because she was still at Snape's house. left alone for all of about 4 hours
Date: 03/23/2011 02:41 PM Title: Chapter 21
A wealth of details, the story is getting better and better. So Ron is a victim, too.
Kind regards
Ischtar
Author's Response: yep, in some ways Ron was a victim, but he didn't have to rape anyone, that was choice more as soon as I can and thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: 03/23/2011 08:26 AM Title: Chapter 21
This is getting so interesting........... I love the politics involved and the manipulations, of course the bashing of Dumbledork was spectacular and this meeting will be simply a time bomb.......... Can't wait......... keep them coming.
Author's Response: thank you, glad you enjoyed. more as soon as I can
Date: 03/23/2011 06:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter, vara.
Author's Response: thank you
[Report This]Date: 03/23/2011 06:19 AM Title: Chapter 21
Sneaky brothers... EIGHT kids? Sheesh, horny buggers.
Looks like things are about to get interesting in regards to the self-proclaimed "Leader of the Light". I would hate to be in Kingsley's shoes right now.
Awesome as always.
More required please.
Author's Response: more on its way, maybe after I get an FA update..lol glad you enjoyed
Date: 03/12/2011 07:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh, not a painting a ghost. Big trouble.
Author's Response: you like the twist then? More as soon as I can and thanks for all the support
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2011 07:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
Fantastic update, I know I will have a great weekend when it started with a update on my favourite story:-))
Hermiones punishment of that old cot Dubmledort were perfect, I especially loved that his lies and curses will be known to all, and that he will "live" to see his name being spoken with contemt by all magical people.
So, Severus, Remus and Sirius in a triad, oh my. I suspected, but even more hoped for a solution like that, what a brilliant twist. Little Teddy will be the best loved and protected child with three fathers like that. Poor that girl who ever breaks his heart:-))
Like Sirius I will not bet on a sure thing like the engagement of Hermione and her wonderful men (loved that the LeStrange brothers could thank Dumbledort for his bad actions, I bet the old cot hated that result of his scheemings). I look forward to see how Hermione get her men to be equal partners in their marriage, if anyone can make it, it would be my favourite girl:-))
Thank you for adding another piece of your wonderful story!
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you are enjoying it...Teddy will be adored and yes, Heaven help the little girl who breaks his heart... Marriage isn't that far off, more as soon as I can
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
That was a beautiful punishment!!! LOL Albus Dumledore as a physcotic manipuliating child lover.....it all seems apt, and everyone got vidicated, and albus got screwed! yay *dances alittle* I love her shock when she looked into the mirror ...like she was going to do that lucille ball and hapro marx bit where they start mirring eachothers actions trying to find out who is real and who isnt.
Great chapter I whole heartedly cannont wait for the next chapter *glee*
Author's Response: I have an evil and twisted mind..manic laughter more as soon as I can and thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2011 07:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
Should have let Remus tear all his ghostly atoms apart! Poor gargoyle... having to play host to the old bat.
Sirus, Severus and Remus? Didn't see that one coming, but I have to say it makes sense. Love that Hermione was finally able to tell Rab and Dolph she loved them. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you..you like the idea of the triad then? more as soon as I can
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2011 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
I love this fic so much. The description of Hermione was so vivid and the bashing was expectacular. Keep them coming your writing is simply amazing. To bunnyhops my sincerest gratitude for betaing this chapter. TY TY TY......
Author's Response: Thank you, glad the bashing was up to standard...more as soon as I can
Date: 03/11/2011 08:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
The story is developping very nicely. Thinking of the pack mates Severus, Remus, and Sirius amuses me. I am looking forward to emjoying the next chapter.Thank you. Ischtar
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed and glad it worked for you more soon
Date: 02/25/2011 08:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wonderful chapter! I am enjoying this story immensely.
Author's Response: thank you
[Report This]Date: 02/23/2011 07:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
*evil laughter* that medlesome old fool! dont let his white hair fool you..dumbledore was a redhead when he was younger. Oh I wonder what she'll do to him mabey use all her uber powers and pull him out of his portrait so he alive again on so she can tourture him slowly ..send him to azkaban...destory his legacy...and have harry publicly discredit him. Okay I admit I put to much thought behind that....
I like how you had Sirius make her confront her fear of abandonment, it was the catalyst needed for her to realize that she's all loved and no one will abandon her.*snicker* thoug watching minerva and snape provide adjectives to harras him wasa lovely...yay team work!
Author's Response: evil laughter ir right, I have such plans for that maniac...lol... the team work was fun, and there will be more from Severus..lol glad you enjoyed and more as soon as I can
[Report This]Date: 02/23/2011 06:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
Poor Sirius. Even when his heart is in the wrong place he sticks his foot in his mouth. And Albus? Someone better check his inquisitors for turpentine!
Author's Response: Yep, foot in mouth disease seems to be contageous glad you liked and as for turpentine..well I'm far more evil
[Report This]Date: 02/23/2011 01:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh how it made my day to find another update to this fantastic story, I am totally in love and this chapter was brilliant. Phineas, and others I guess, have obviously been prevented to tell the truth by a very manipulative Dumbledore. I hope Minerva, as the current Headmistress, hexes his portrait. I also got a much better view of Sirius here, it migth have been smart to be better prepared when dealing with a Enchantress who have trouble controlling her magic, but he asked the question with the best intentions and he dealt with the situation in the most excellent way. And, I totally get a kick when Teddy helps his papa, I do so enjoy when my favourite characters have a good life.
I will be lurking around for more:-))
(It should be possible to give a even higher rating than 10, you would have gotten lots of Gold Stars from me:-))
Author's Response: thank you, glad you are enjoying. It amazes me sometimes where my muse likes to go, then I look back in the story and the clues have been there frmo the start. Phineas has been fun to write. Minerva, amongst others, will have their fun, I only hope it lives up to your expectations... More as soon as I can, but my muse is playing in my original world at the moment. Hopefully post those as they are ready
[Report This]Date: 02/23/2011 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
Funny and amazing.......... Ah what can i say ..... Love Dumbledore's bashings.........
Author's Response: evil laugh..oh so do I and this one has been a long time coming
[Report This]Date: 02/23/2011 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
just love this story,it gets better with every chapter!
Author's Response: lol, glad you are enjoying. more as soon as I can
Date: 02/23/2011 06:21 AM Title: Chapter 19
The wait was worth it. More interesting tidbits. I like Albus Dumbledore being in trouble, he really is / was a manipulator. Thank you.
Author's Response: you're more than welcome and thanks for taking the time to review