Penname: Shortcake [Contact] Real name: Alexandria
Member Since: 01/10/2011
Membership status: Member
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Addicted to good fanfic, trust me there is bad fanfic......gramatical errors and horrid dialouge give me nightmares. I left ff.net and aff.net a while agao and up until last year had stopped reading, but then last august I was laid-up in bed after reciving my new kidney and thankfully got sucked into GE, and all the goodness that comes with it.


Which is how I ended up here.... jamies_lady is a personal fav. and am stoked she's archiving here. Yes some call it stalking I call it devoted readership :)


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Summary: Harry is called to the bedside of a dying Hermione, only to find he is the cause of her misfortune
Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6304 Read Count: 22657
[Report This] Published: 01/10/2011 Updated: 01/10/2011
Reviewer: Shortcake Signed
Date: 01/14/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This one makes me cry everytime



Author's Response: thank you, then it worked

Summary: better the kiss you don't know photo betterthekiss2.gif
Hermione finds herself with the two LeStrange brothers at her mercy. What is a girl to do
Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117346 Read Count: 81191
[Report This] Published: 01/12/2011 Updated: 07/18/2011
Reviewer: Shortcake Signed
Date: 01/14/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay its up here! Now I can just check here with baited breath about Hermoine's exploits *dance around giggling eating Slytherin Cookies*



Author's Response: thank you, it will always be posted here first...and there will be slytherin cookies in the next chapter or two

Reviewer: Shortcake Signed
Date: 01/17/2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Yay: a Maraduer sandwich! *giggles and squees*, and a snarky Snape getting the drop on Rab :P  I cant wait to see her get mad at them...and them grovel... and lol watch Oyster defend her mistress  kitten scratches on a big bad death eater is comical in my mind.

Hoping to watch Lucius get rebuffed as only a purblood man can in the next chapter , knowing Cissca she'll probably ask for documantation with two wittness signing it that state "L. Malfoy is has been a prat to one H.Granger and has apologized accordingly...So yes you can shag him again"

I swear if I was better at editing, spelling, content...hell take your pic; I'd ask to beta your next piece.



Author's Response: Yep, a marauder sandwich, oh to be the meat there.... there will be payback to certain brothers, hope you approve of it... more as soon as I can and thanks for the offer

Reviewer: Shortcake Signed
Date: 01/21/2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

half..naked..slytherin..brothers...*gurgles blissfuly*

I know there should be more of a review like, how will remus and sverus react once they trio head downstairs, or how or when Hermoines going to fix it so lucius can get back into his wifes bed,or will cissa make him suffer a bit more. Yet as I have stated peviously ......

half ...naked....slytherin....brothers....*gurgles inchoherntly now but blissfully so*



Author's Response: that's about the limit of my mental ability at some points as well..Semi naked brothers....

Reviewer: Shortcake Signed
Date: 01/29/2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Antlers...lol classic! Hmmm what oh what did that idiot ginger do to Harry? What is he hiding? Wonder if this will get him more abuse at Azkaban? Yay for Remus!

LOL Sirius had a good point; no second war beacuse everyone would be trying to get into her knickers....oh my *has thought* Rodolphus and Rabastan at 25....oh the rakish-ness and Carpathian-like looks and neanderthal protective streak *shivers* ...that thought is so delicious it has to be fattening

I await untill next time, and so enjoy your work....hehe I'm starting to re-read "through the eyes of a child" when I need a good writing fix.



Author's Response: now that thought has been steaming...Rabastan and Rodolphus as good looking as Carpathians...(I'm re-reading Tempest's story at the moment) and that neanderthal protective streak..is rape always wrong? bother! it is isn't it... Never mind I can get them into bed with Hermione and I will very soon. Glad you are enjoying the writing.. please let me know what you think of the original....

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Date: 02/10/2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

It is my professional opion as a reader of your work never to consume liquid when reading your dialouge. Case in point; Narcissa's gift Lucius had me scrambling for a towel to clean off my screen and keyboard. Though, completely worth it.....LOL sooooooo worth it!

I really think you should have Hermoine soothe Rodoplus's fears everytime he thinks he's mucked something up, the realtoinship is new gaffes are bound to be made when dealing with muggles be it the girl your courting or her parents. Dig the unicorn!

I agree with Luna that most men suffer from "foot in mouth disease" but I do wonder who cast that spell on Harry, Ron Is quite inept......though Molly and Ginny on the other hand..vindictiveness can be quite a motivator.

Cant wait for the next chapter!!!! Hoping Narcissa does get that Emrald necklace...LOL

 



Author's Response: LOL, I've been in trouble from a lot of people, sprayed cats and washed computers... Rodolphus will get his reassurance, don't worry. She loves them both and equally and as for the necklace, wait and see

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Date: 02/23/2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

*evil laughter* that medlesome old fool! dont let his white hair fool you..dumbledore was a redhead when he was younger. Oh I wonder what she'll do to him mabey use all her uber powers and pull him out of his portrait so he alive again on so she can tourture him slowly ..send him to azkaban...destory his legacy...and have harry publicly discredit him. Okay I admit I put to much thought behind that....

I like how you had Sirius make her confront her fear of abandonment, it was the catalyst needed for her to realize that she's all loved and no one will abandon her.*snicker* thoug watching minerva and snape provide adjectives to harras him wasa lovely...yay team work!



Author's Response: evil laughter ir right, I have such plans for that maniac...lol... the team work was fun, and there will be more from Severus..lol glad you enjoyed and more as soon as I can

Reviewer: Shortcake Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/12/2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

That was a beautiful punishment!!! LOL Albus Dumledore as a physcotic manipuliating child lover.....it all seems apt, and everyone got vidicated, and albus got screwed! yay *dances alittle* I love her shock when she looked into the mirror ...like she was going to do that lucille ball and hapro marx bit where they start mirring eachothers actions trying to find out who is real and who isnt.

Great chapter I whole heartedly cannont wait for the next chapter *glee*



Author's Response: I have an evil and twisted mind..manic laughter more as soon as I can and thanks for the review

Reviewer: Shortcake Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/23/2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

*laughs hystericaly* The Mafloys good at political spin...who'dah thunk? Maybe this will get Lucius back into Cissa knickers? *snicker* Oh the disbelife and outrage of Molly is going to be a beautiful sight to behold. I wonder if Harry can legaly change Albus Severus name?

Grand Chapter as always, cant wait to see the wolf pack come together  as Remus said the next few months are going to be interesting. Poor Kinglsey...poor poor Kingsley.

I like how you summed up that manilplitive twonk "so he maniplitated everyon cause he couldnt get a leg over on the guy he wanted?" I have a feeling that might have been part of J.K's original character description of Albus *lol*

So yet again I wait with baited breath for the next installment, eager with anitcipation.



Author's Response: there is no Albus Seveus yet..Harry hasn't married Luna... glad you enjoyed the twists and turns and more as soon as I can

Summary:  photo c662c5fa.gif
Life changes forever when a child falls through time and lands in Malfoy Manor
Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 75 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286638 Read Count: 805280
[Report This] Published: 01/24/2011 Updated: 01/24/2011
Reviewer: Shortcake Signed
Date: 01/24/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is the story that got me hooked on you. I lurve it to death!



Author's Response: thank you. I still can't believe I managed to be so stupid as to delete it from GE....ugh

Summary: William is living peacefully in the Monastry when a Viking raid changes his life forever
Categories: Buffy
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123952 Read Count: 2070
[Report This] Published: 02/16/2011 Updated: 02/16/2011
Reviewer: Shortcake Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/17/2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

This is awesome! It reminds me so much of how Sandra Hill writes. This was fantasitc to read and I greedily hope for a sequel chronicling the lives of the children....*holds hands in prayer of hope*

As always beautifully written and funny and love how you "broke" Dru so she was that fae-like creature we all come to adore/fear. Some serious Angel bashing going on..lol but then again a spuffy girl has to have some fun dosent she?

Cant wait to see what comes next out of your mind.



Author's Response: thank you for a lovely compliment... I have actually had this one de-spuffied and published on Lulu.com Charlotte Douglas Dark Sail..its a real book, with a cover and everything :) I should have a sort of original up by tonight my time. Hope you enjoy that as well

Nerola's Tale by jamies_lady Rated: 17+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 57]
Summary: Past Featured StoryPhotobucket


Master-At-Arms Thewlin's dreams rest in one woman's eyes. Nerola, a visitor to the Keep he lives in
Categories: Original Fiction, Seven Daughters of the rainbow
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128189 Read Count: 7003
[Report This] Published: 03/24/2011 Updated: 09/07/2012
Reviewer: Shortcake Signed
Date: 03/27/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Is it wrong to wait till your at like chapter 10 to start reading? I bet it is yet to be fair, reading your stuff is quite addicting and a bit crushing when you realize that youve run out of chapters. I got spolied beacuse I read "Through the eyes of a child" first. so umm yeah, I'm bratty about this but for a realy good reason; see lodgic! :)

Hehe but I know once I start reading this I'll be hooked your stuff is always fantatsic! *wait paitiently for chapters 3-10*



Author's Response: thank you, chapter 3 is well under way... glad you enjoyed this, I must admit to being head over heels in love with Thewlin, even when he gets it wrong

Reviewer: Shortcake Signed
Date: 03/29/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

LOL anything to get me to review huh, an email and a cleverly written chapter *blusshes* awww shucks.

I really want to meet scarlett now :) I have a feeling shes a cross between hermoine and lara croft :) I also have a feeling that we are going to be meeting some other brother of the rainbow clan *snort* wonder who will fight with papa thelwin first?

Go midevil on morgans arse! Seriously like wrap him inwet leather strips and set himin the sun to bake so when the leather starts to dry it will constrict his air flow, break his ribs and cause internal bleeding, oh and have dogs pee on him , children throw stones and adults yell at him and kick him!

Dang it....youve got me hooked again......:P



Author's Response: you know I'm a review whore... Scarlet is on her way, along with a couple of 'friends' Morgan will suffer, and for a long long time... glad you enjoyed and more as soon as I can

Reviewer: Shortcake Signed
Date: 04/03/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

LOL, sex magic, threesomes, shapeshifiting, and backstories galore! Rock on! I'm loving Scarlet and her harem, though I bet Cyanea's is larger!. I got another email from you.....one might think that you dont trust me to check for updates and that you crave my feedback.....personally I think you are hoping I work for a major publishing house: the paranormal romance dept.  LOL

love this cant wait for the next chapter/email :)

 



Author's Response: me ? a review junkie? never !! lol you aren't an editor are you? no, that only happens in my dreams... next chapter should be up later today

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Date: 04/04/2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well, as the saying goes "people fear what they dont know" but at least Thewlin is starting to try and understand why nea needs so many lovers to repleninsh her energy, it will take awhile but I'm sure he'll get there. He did have a valid concern about power abuse.

What I really truly want is indigo and Nea's back story ! *stamps foot*  Please? I am such a sucker for a tragicly jilted lover story, it fills that 16 year old angsy part of my heart when glee is in re-runs....

Love the chapter cant wait for the next one, I hope this has given you your review fix :)



Author's Response: review fix taken, thank you... there will be all seven girls stories done eventually....including Indi's and Nea's.... glad you enjoyed and next chapter is with Bunnyhops as I type this

Reviewer: Shortcake Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Dam you and back stories that tease! I'm simply in lurve with your angsty muse, is he by any chance 6'2, with broad shoulders, who growls when he's about to kiss you(or give you an idea) and was sorted into Slytherin?

I swear there is fan art in here somwhere....if only i had a complete character list and short bio....LOL most likely after the series. Thank goodness this is going on lulu (I heard rumours...alright mainly musings from you..) well mostly I thank goodness that I'm geek enough to know what that is, and how to ask my dad to show me how to format. Being the daughter of a former IT guy sooooo has its perks.

Cant wait for the next chapter



Author's Response: i love the idea of the art work...and wish i was that good with computers. next chapter should be off to the betas tomorrow thanks for the review, they really do make my day

Author's Response: i love the idea of the art work...and wish i was that good with computers. next chapter should be off to the betas tomorrow thanks for the review, they really do make my day