Date: 02/21/2017 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 18
Wow that was an interesting ending. I do love how you explained everything with Dawn and Rogues aging, as well as the other information she imparted in the flash back sequence. I always worried about that part because it just felt too quickly done, convenient and forced. I had the utmost faith in you though. I knew it would all make sense at some point. {smiles}
I do love how you ended it with him looking for Buffy and Spike. I think you made it believable and workable with who his mother was, etc.. Nicely done.
Date: 02/09/2017 11:23 am Title: Chapter 18
I liked it. I really liked Alex telling Imothep what we all knew from the movies--she never loved him as much as he loved her. And the appearance of Anqet intrigued me. And Ardeth being reunited with Hassib was fun! I loved this story!