Date: 12/17/2015 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 14
An interesting choice to end things. Nice work as always Mary
Date: 12/09/2015 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 14
I liked it. Especially Buffy in labor, that cracked me up…as did the doctor's non-reaction Buffy's weirdness.
Date: 12/08/2015 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 13
Well, that's one way of dealing with it! I loved Spike and Buffy agreeing that they can't wait to see 19 year old Dawn again…and ground her. LOL Good end (& twist) to the end of Glory.
Date: 12/07/2015 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 12
Noooo, not Anya! Especially since Willow doesn't have the emotional connection to "want" to set her right. Maybe Dawn will be the one to fix Anya. I liked Buffy giving the knights the fake Key and Anya not being in the mood for Xander's hissyfit.
Date: 12/06/2015 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 11
Wonderful way to have this chapter go!
Date: 12/06/2015 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 10
I hope they are truly able to save Joyce. I always felt so awful that she died in the show.
Excellent way to handle the reveals. {Smiiles}
Date: 12/06/2015 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 9
Interesting way to rewrite Season 5 events.
Date: 12/06/2015 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 11
Thank you for skipping over the rescue, the important part was that it happened. And I LOVED Buffy jumping into action once she knew Spike was in danger.
Date: 12/05/2015 08:50 am Title: Chapter 10
Love that Spike took everything so well, though Dru helped a bit I think. Not a fan of Dawn being bait, but I'll sacrificed her if necessary for Spike. LOL. I wonder who Faith's mate is…Lawson? Terrific chapter!
Date: 12/04/2015 09:08 am Title: Chapter 9
Dru, I'm guessing you should have listened to Dawn. Spike will be/is upset, but I can't wait for the Spuffy talk! And Harmony hooking up with Dry could be the best thing for both of them.
Date: 12/03/2015 10:09 am Title: Chapter 8
Aww, I like Buffy caring about Spike. Loved Xander and Spike actually having a civilized conversation, and I hope Xander grows a set and tells Willow and Anya to figure it out. Heartbeat for Spike? That's gonna freak him out.
Date: 12/03/2015 12:43 am Title: Chapter 7
{hugs} Yeah! Goodbye Riley!
Nice job with the Quellor demon. Hopefully they can catch Joyce's anuerysm before it bursts this time.
Date: 12/03/2015 12:38 am Title: Chapter 6
Ooo ... now I love that twist!!!
Date: 12/03/2015 12:35 am Title: Chapter 5
Riley is an idiot. Great writing.
Date: 12/02/2015 10:30 am Title: Chapter 7
LOL, it still worked for me! Glad Riley's out of the picture and that Buffy is becoming more comfortable with Spike as her soul mate. A little exposition-y with Dawn, but necessary. Good update!
Date: 12/01/2015 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ooh, future daughter! Excellent twist. At least she's getting proper training unlike Willow at the same age. And I liked seeing another Sunnydaler without Hellmouth syndrome.
Date: 11/30/2015 11:45 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh Riley, Buffy doesn't need a he-man, she just needs a man she can depend on which isn't you. I liked the conversation between Spike and Riley, but I see nothing got through. Great update!
Date: 11/30/2015 11:23 am Title: Chapter 4
I always love the Scoobies standing up to Tara's family. And waah to Riley, quit getting suckjobs and maybe you could keep your girlfriend's interest.
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2015 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
Uh oh ... jealous lump of Captain Cardboard on the loose.
I loved how you handled Tara's family. LOL
Date: 11/29/2015 05:24 am Title: Chapter 3
OMG I love that there is a new story (the people on the plane back from Tenerife not so much...and my squels aren't that loud I mean Really) can't wait til the next update
Date: 11/28/2015 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
Interesting chapter. I'm curious how it unfolds for you to explain certain things and events.
Date: 11/27/2015 11:36 am Title: Chapter 2
Great storytelling by the monk! I can't wait to find out who Dawn really is. Ooh an agent of Glory? Glory herself? Spuffy's future child? Great update.