Date: 03/01/2010 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 12
Mary ... I fixed this line by adding in the was ... Silly me. It is the last paragraph before we see Amon and Caly again at the end. Sometimes I reread back through and go dang ... I screwed up again or how did I miss a word. Though I catch myself reading through it and my mind putting the word in.
Wesley nodded in agreement. What he didn't say out loud was that it kinda turned him on.
Date: 06/13/2009 08:11 am Title: Chapter 12
Yippee! The little Tribble will be here soon. {giggles}
Date: 06/13/2009 08:10 am Title: Chapter 12
OMG! Are they getting a tribble? That's what it sounded like to me...I hope so! Great chappie! I really like that Xander's gone...but is it for good? And the Anya/Wes stuff is terrific...Vengeance for Cordy? Hmm...can't wait to see what's around the corner.
Date: 06/13/2009 08:10 am Title: Chapter 12
Elbs like the little gizmo creatures...aww I can't wait the next chapter. Great writing,
jace