Date: 06/13/2009 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
{claps} Cute story. You had a very believable reason why the Slayer line would jump from female to male and then from male to female. It made sense to me.
Date: 06/13/2009 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 13
Hehe. Cool ending! Interesting that they decided to turn William when he was ready.
Date: 06/13/2009 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 13
A very touching ending! I don't know how I missed finishing this one up. It was one of my faves. Loved it!
Date: 06/13/2009 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
YAY! You finished. I'm happy both because I like the story, it's a lot of fun, and because you can focus on one of the others you still have left. Both of these are totally reasons to jump for joy. I love that Angel got stuck with taking care of Riley. HEE HEE HEE
Date: 06/13/2009 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
excellent ending! loved this story.
Date: 06/13/2009 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 13
That was a great story Mary! Your writing style rocks!<br /> Keep up the great work,
Jace