Date: 03/02/2012 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story, the Beth / Spike relatinship is really sweet. I like the way you show whats going on in vamp Buffys life at the same time as what the Scoobys are up to. Hoping for more vamp buffy stories in future.
Date: 06/14/2009 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE this story!!! I'm dying to know what's going to happen when Spike returns! I really really hope you aren't going to abandon it... or are you? Please, say you aren't!!
Date: 06/14/2009 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh {bad word} I've just realised this isn't finished, and what I thought was a sequel isn't.... Pleeeease update soon!
Date: 06/14/2009 11:45 am Title: Chapter 1
as i've said before, i LOVE this series. and i'm really enjoying the vamp/secret slayer part of the plot. i can't wait to see everyone's reactions and adjustments to the truth about "beth." especially spike! keep up the fantastic work and i hope to read more soon!
Date: 06/14/2009 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, Mary, the Black Specter is a fantastic character. Is she the slayer side of Buffy? You've left some great clues for Giles to follow. Love how you're comparing Cassie and Beth's daily events. What language is the Specter speaking? The first slayer's language maybe? You're one talented writer and I'm so excited to have found your website. Thanks.
Date: 06/14/2009 11:42 am Title: Chapter 1
very well written, very exciting
Date: 06/14/2009 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1
great work. i love the beth/Specter angle. I also love cassie. can't wait for more
Date: 06/14/2009 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1
wonderful story mary! loved it!