[Report This]Date: 07/06/2009 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
Spike growled when seeing Angelus? Sneered or snarled lip curled at his fantastic luck having Angelus appear might be better? I can just imagine him reveling in the fact Angelus is in front of him bouncing on his feet just itching for a fight like in Destiny? Just a suggestion Mary :)! I LOVE how you have him become overprotective even for those who mean something to Buffy. I sooooo love this story!
Date: 06/30/2009 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hah xD loved the way Spike scared the bully away:P
Wants to read more now :P
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Date: 06/13/2009 07:04 am Title: Chapter 3
Wicked good. I liked how Spike was talking himself into a rage about what Angelus did to Elizabeth.
Buffy good at french, if that is true, you'll have to include that in the next chapter.
Please write some more protective Spike soon and keep that evil vampiress far away from those two intweend souls.
Date: 06/13/2009 07:02 am Title: Chapter 3
Gotta love Protective!Spike :)
Date: 06/13/2009 07:02 am Title: Chapter 3
aw...spike saved willow! glad he told someone else his worries about angel. loved giles and buffy's convo about spike (floved that he was eavesdropping), and how buffy didn't mind being thought of as Spike's property.
...will buffy be better at french? and i hope we see her meeting with brenna soon! wonderful chappie.
Date: 06/13/2009 07:01 am Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait to see that ass kicking that Angel is about to get from Spike. I love how Spike helped Willow and Willow realized that Spike would help her and not eat her afterward. Keep up the great writing.
Jace