Date: 06/13/2009 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
Very good chapter! I like the whole idea of Warren getting what he deserves.
Date: 06/13/2009 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
What a twist? I can't wait to hear exactly how these pregnancies came about.
Date: 06/13/2009 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
ok, first, yea! tasha gets to be a spuffy baby! and i floved that lindsey smirked at angelus (and that he's darla's slave). and the master and lilah? that's awesome! can't wait to find out how vamps can impregnate humans...slayers, i get, but humans...i need some explany please! obviously, i really enjoyed this chapter, i liked seeing more of spike's duties on his estate...is mina drac's mina? and who does angelus have as his pet? cordy? that would be interesting. and i really like the idea of faith/gunn. can't wait to see the hunt through the maze, i'm sure it'll be tons o' fun...'cause warren's a butt! thanks for posting.
Date: 06/13/2009 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
Angelus never keeps his big mouth shut! Well, at least no one is letting him get away with it. Good job!
Date: 06/13/2009 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
Thanks for the update, I was wondering when this story was coming back.
Date: 06/13/2009 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
gotta have faith! great chappie, loved that lindsey is darla's pet (and that spike got him for her). can't wait to find out how and why darla and nest gave buffy to spike...yea gunn! glad to see him. wonderful stuff, so glad to see a new chappie on this.
Date: 06/13/2009 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful story. You paint such a vivid world to imagine! Thanks.
Date: 06/13/2009 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is good, I can't wait to see more of this...I believe it's unfinished? I hope I'm not wrong otherwise I'll look foolish! Keep up the great work!
Jace
Date: 06/13/2009 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow great exit line. I liked it, I'd love to read more.
Date: 06/13/2009 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Exceelntstart. I hope that Angel won't be allowed to hurt his pet any more.
Date: 06/13/2009 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
"His fingers grapsed and lifted her chin once more,"
Should be "grasped." Other than that, fantastic start to the story. I am really looking forward to more. Hopefully there will be some backstory to explain how the Slayer became a pet. Or did a pet become the slayer?
More soon please.
Author's Response: I corrected that. Thanks. My fingers get tangled in the keys sometimes. And good questions! I'll try my best to answer them.
[Report This]Date: 05/30/2009 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 7
Poor Cordy and dang another hot Spuffy moment! The position...HMMM naughty Mary lol...This Master stuff isn't my fave but it so works for this story. Doing a great job with this one Mary!
[Report This]Date: 05/30/2009 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
Riley and Parker with Dru? Loving that one LOL. LMAO when Angelus came in and was so dismissed LOL. I've always wondered about Gunn and Faith together...Great chapter Mary!
[Report This]Date: 05/30/2009 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm so loving this little story with Draconis and Mina...The minute they were mentioned I knew Draconis would spark the alliance. Awesome background how everyone came together! I am loving this story!!!!
[Report This]Date: 05/30/2009 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
Dust? HE deserves mutilation *grins wickedly* Loved how you changed the age Slayers are called. God what was Joss thinking with that??? So very wrong on so many levels. Great chappie!
[Report This]Date: 05/30/2009 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
I am so loving this!!!!!!! Tasha and William awwwwwww. More definitely more!
[Report This]Date: 05/30/2009 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
Let the games begin...(Giggles) Loved it Mary!
[Report This]Date: 05/30/2009 11:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Hot opening and love how Lawson just puts out the rules even as Angelus balks at them. I can tell even as reading this so many times (lol) that Angelus will get whats due to him...Love it!