Date: 06/13/2009 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 43, written for Eilowyn on LJ
Dinner interrupted worked quite well. Plus, I always love seeing the littlest of the non-human scoobies. :P Though the thought of Spike & Xander trying to wrestle the El'birt away from Buffy gave me a good chuckle.
Date: 06/13/2009 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 42, Season 2
I can't remember if I reviewed this one already or not...but I liked it. Short & sweet--& I get a funny feeling that his revenge won't go quite as badly as he thinks. :P
[Report This]Date: 06/10/2009 03:48 am Title: Chapter 1, Futuristic AU
Hey there, just letting you know that I am re-reading this set of stories, and I am really enjoying them.
A lot of these would make great longer stories.
[Report This]Date: 06/08/2009 03:37 am Title: Chapter 43, written for Eilowyn on LJ
That was hilarious. I don't know why it hit me that way, but it just did. I LOVED IT! {giggles} I can just picture it all. {cracking up} You've had the Hassib's so intertwined with so many of your stories. It was perfect to see this. You could even label this as just a one shot in your regular story section. It was so cute!
[Report This]Date: 06/08/2009 03:35 am Title: Chapter 42, Season 2
Ooo ... I printed this one up to put in my file of your scenes without a story that might be revisited later. Very intriguing snippet that is just begging for a story.
[Report This]Date: 06/08/2009 03:33 am Title: Chapter 41, continuation of chapters 36, 38, and 39, School Hard
This is a nice little string you have going on with these related scenes without a story. Maybe you can make a little "Snippet" Series that puts links to all of these together. That way people can also watch the progression as more ideas come to you? {hugs}
[Report This]Date: 06/07/2009 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 43, written for Eilowyn on LJ
Writing wise...Well written. This could actually fit in the realm of Broken Betrayal or any of your stories really. It was funny how you used the El’birt demon from the IG stories... Yeah,uh, how did Spike get in lol...Good observation from Xander! It was totally random and can just imagine the faces of all these strangers just showing up lmao...Great short Mary!
Author's Response:
The Hassib's are demons of course. That's how Spike could get in.
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 42, Season 2
OOOOH that is just so evil it works!!!!!! This I like and has even more potential to become something bigger. Wow I love your ideas in theses scenes! Can't wait for more Mary!
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 41, continuation of chapters 36, 38, and 39, School Hard
Evil laugh here that is so freaking awesome how they tell Angel what really happened. God this so needs to be a bigger story!!!!! Love it!
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 40, season 7
Snif Sniff that was touching.
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 39, Continuation of Chapters 36 and 38, season 2, School Hard
Okkkaaaay this is interesting....More please? Is Joyce Buffy's child or something...I don't get it? Help Mary...This would be great story wise...Is it just a scene or will you do more for it?
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 38, Continuation of Chapter 36, Season 2, School Hard
Huh? confused....
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 37, Late Season 7
Omigod I went from laughing my ass off to completely crushed into two seconds flat. Wow this is so sad! This is devastating. I wish to see more of this though...I want to know more. Please?
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 36, Season 2, School's Hard
Wow that was freaking hot and in Principle Snyder's office LMFAO!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 35, Season 6
OMIFREAKINGGOD!!!!!!!!! All I picture is a Big Bunny humping Buffy!!!!! OMIGOD! LMFAO!!!! Seriously laughing so damn hard I am crying LOL!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 34, Post NFA
LMAO!!!
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 33, AU All Seasons
This is interesting...Will there ever be more of this??? What shocked me and even though there is a spell on Buffy to hide her Slayerness was the fact Spike didn't pick up on it. Hmmmm I want some more of this one. *Wink Wink*
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 32, Season 3 Lover's Walk time period
YESSSS I loved this! Showing just how much Buffy was a good Slayer even though she detested it. Hmmmm. This is good as is or maybe longer.
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 31, Season 4
Ok now that was freaking damn hot Mary! I so want more of that one DAMN!!!!!! I love it!
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 30, AU Season 6 Futuristic
Interesting. Buffy is almost child-like in the way she came back from her friends resurrecting her. This would be awesome if it was longer. I likes it!!!! I almost expected Buffy to say something like 'My precious' when she spoke of Heaven when Spike called him Angel. LOL. This would definitely be a great story.
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 29, Season 4, Something Blue
That was soooo FLUFFY!!!!! LOVE IT! I so wished this happened lol!
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 28, Mirror World
Wow I loved how this ended. It explains why Buffy was desperate for them to stake her. At first when I read it I thought it was cuz she staked her Sire but wow. He placed a spell on her...That's cruel. This was actually a tad bit on the angsty side, very well done!
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 27, Season 5ish
Honestly...That was so touching I had tears in my eyes. At first reading this I was like uh isn't Buffy the Slayer and then I realized she is a vampire or maybe something else like a turned Slayer? Anywho...This was an amazing short scene. All of them inside her then saying goodbye to her as ghosts was so very sad!!!! Giggles at how they took down Glory and called her on her trying to change things, well done! You could take it further or you could not...It works both ways. Amazing Mary!
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 26, No set Season, but with WARNING in cap letters
Gasp who could it be...part of me wants to say it's Spike seeing how she was thinking of him, but not realistic. This would be good if you didn't continue it to place it as a challenge actually. Does she succeed in committing suicide? Who finds her? Then determine which season it should be. Though most will say Season 6 but I think it should be before or maybe after that season. Too many Season 6 stories out there. Love this idea because I'm actually shocked this wasn't an issue that was approached on the show. It would have been interesting to see how it was handled. Great job Mary!
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 25, Post Chosen
This is actually cute...Me likes it!!!!! AWWWWWWW love the questionare!