[Report This]Date: 07/03/2009 10:15 am Title: Chapter 9
We don't see too many evil Xanders out there in fanfic world, and this one is a really creepy, evil Xander. You've taken characters we know and added a new twist, and added original characters that feel just as true to the story/dimension as those we already know. Well written and original--I'm looking forward to more of this story!
Date: 06/30/2009 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 9
Naughty you, skipping over the Spuffy sex!! That's okay, you're forgiven...mainly b/c Xander's gonna die. :P I like your use of Razor, especially showing him w/ a brain & using it. & one of the Wood boys has a thing for Dawn? Wonder how Buffy will feel about it. & will we see Joyce yell @ Giles? That could be hilariously fun. :D Can't wait to see what happens when Cordelia meets the boys & some good Spuffy sex! Loved that Spuffy mated right away, by the way. Great chapter!
Date: 06/30/2009 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great Chapter mary! Keep em coming!