[Report This]Date: 07/26/2009 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 10
*squeee* a double proposal! Hehe. Man, those slayers get pregnant fast!! Travers is playing with fire with that Beta 2...
Date: 07/08/2009 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
When will you write the next chapter? I really like this story. Don't rush the ending because so many stories start good and then feel rushed as the get to the ending. I like good stories. Go back and read the first two chapters. I found some grammatical errors that cloud what I think you are trying to say. My e-mail is emajade32439@yahoo.com
[Report This]Date: 07/08/2009 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 10
Yes, yes, yes!! This part of the tale is fun. Will Travers and Xander get maimed?
[Report This]Date: 07/08/2009 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
Great so far. I especially love darkXander, almost more then I like acceptyXander. And while Faith is normally on my hate list, I will admit to liking sweet Faith. (Especially when she ends up with Lawson, who is quickly becoming my favorite supporting Character)
And as usual, I'm enjoying the cast of characters and I love how much effort you put into original and unique backstories for them. You always make them enjoyable to read, and at the same time plausible and well suited to the Buffyverse which at times can make or break a story.
I can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 07/07/2009 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ooh, preggers already?!? Love it! & great new chappie, I really liked Buffy's way of turning the marriage question around on Joyce. :P & I liked that the Council man finally found a way to get a message to the Slayers. & I lurved the dual proposals. :D Uh-oh, looks like Travers has more tricks up his sleeve...though Travers still doesn't know just how outmatched he is. Yay! & I loved Anya's greeting to Razor, it was so cute! & good to see he felt the same way.