[Report This]Date: 07/08/2009 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 10
Yes, yes, yes!! This part of the tale is fun. Will Travers and Xander get maimed?
[Report This]Date: 07/08/2009 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
Great so far. I especially love darkXander, almost more then I like acceptyXander. And while Faith is normally on my hate list, I will admit to liking sweet Faith. (Especially when she ends up with Lawson, who is quickly becoming my favorite supporting Character)
And as usual, I'm enjoying the cast of characters and I love how much effort you put into original and unique backstories for them. You always make them enjoyable to read, and at the same time plausible and well suited to the Buffyverse which at times can make or break a story.
I can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 07/07/2009 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ooh, preggers already?!? Love it! & great new chappie, I really liked Buffy's way of turning the marriage question around on Joyce. :P & I liked that the Council man finally found a way to get a message to the Slayers. & I lurved the dual proposals. :D Uh-oh, looks like Travers has more tricks up his sleeve...though Travers still doesn't know just how outmatched he is. Yay! & I loved Anya's greeting to Razor, it was so cute! & good to see he felt the same way.
[Report This]Date: 07/03/2009 10:15 am Title: Chapter 9
We don't see too many evil Xanders out there in fanfic world, and this one is a really creepy, evil Xander. You've taken characters we know and added a new twist, and added original characters that feel just as true to the story/dimension as those we already know. Well written and original--I'm looking forward to more of this story!
Date: 06/30/2009 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 9
Naughty you, skipping over the Spuffy sex!! That's okay, you're forgiven...mainly b/c Xander's gonna die. :P I like your use of Razor, especially showing him w/ a brain & using it. & one of the Wood boys has a thing for Dawn? Wonder how Buffy will feel about it. & will we see Joyce yell @ Giles? That could be hilariously fun. :D Can't wait to see what happens when Cordelia meets the boys & some good Spuffy sex! Loved that Spuffy mated right away, by the way. Great chapter!
Date: 06/30/2009 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great Chapter mary! Keep em coming!
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2009 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love all of your stories, but this is quickly becoming one of my favorites. I don't know why, but you finally made Xander out to be what I always thought of him REALLY being like underneath all that clown act he had going. You know there was something dark and nasty.
Can't wait to read more of this and your other WIP's.
Date: 06/19/2009 01:43 am Title: Chapter 8
Great chappie! Can't wait for Xander to die--Harmony wasn't my fave character, but still...& I loved the boys' reaction when they heard about Queen C. I was glad to see Spike & the rest making sure Buffy didn't keep blaming herself. & Anya as Razor's ex? Soooo looking forward to that reunion!
[Report This]Date: 06/18/2009 10:47 am Title: Chapter 8
Okay, interesting. like it.
Date: 06/13/2009 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 7
Xander's a dead man, Xander's a dead man. I hafta keep telling myself that (& that he's a fictional character) so I don't try to leap through my computer screen & beat his ass. :D I'm liking seeing the Scooby ladies (& Giles) bond w/ Spike's group. & I'm super glad Anya, Willow, & Tara are already beyond Xander's reach. Hmm, it'll be interesting to see how Spuffy handle Xander's kidnapping of Harmony. & I was happy to see that no one had heard from Angel--knowing him he probably got pissed & asked Dru to thrall Xander. Great chappie!
Date: 06/13/2009 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
Faith might be gettin' her some vamp lovin' too? I'm down w/ that. LOL I like the idea that Xander is under a thrall--I just worry he won't care about controlling his darkness; & Giles is probably right, I'm sure Xander's contacted the Wanker Brigade already...thinking he'll still get Buffy. Loved Giles' reaction to Nikki & her family...I think he may need a whole bottle of Scotch! Great chappie, & I'm glad we saw some of the "protected ones".
Date: 06/13/2009 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
Loved Spuffy's first date...and that it isn't just Spike's vampy-ness that gets Buffy hot! ;) Ugh, Xander's about to get my boot up his butt, I'm sure Spuffy can handle him, but enough is enough!! Maybe Tara & Willow should think about some wards for everyone's homes & the Magic Box. I wouldn't want the gang taken by surprise when Xander acts again.
Date: 06/13/2009 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm glad Giles did more research w/ Oz & Wes' help. Will we see them come to town? That would be awesome. & I liked that all the girls were present so that they know exactly what's going on with Xander. Can't wait to find out what's up w/ the "protected ones" & how that'll affect how Spuffy relate to one another. & yay! Glory's dead!! No dead Buffy torn from Heaven!! Fantastic chappie, I still have a few more to go to catch up!
Date: 06/13/2009 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
Xander is completely twisted. No wonder everyone is pissed off at him, I am too! Hopefully the day ends better for Buffy with her date; if anyone can help her push aside her worries for awhile it would be her intended. Great chapter.
Date: 06/13/2009 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
Xander always did strike me as an Angeuls wannabe. Say..! any chance of Spike giving him a "William the Bloody Special?" Railroad spikes & all? (~prepares gratuitous bribe~)
Just asking...
Awesome as always, Mary.
LCF
Date: 06/13/2009 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ew...Xander! You're helping me work through my Xander hate...b/c this is exactly how I see him through the seasons. Loved the truth spell, & that everyone is ready to throw him out of their lives. Hopefully, even if Xander gets to Giles first, Giles will believe the girls & keep Xander away. If not, I'm sure Anya could open a rival Magic Box that put his out of business. :D & I'm glad Spike does his research...or @ least that Lawson does. :P Can't wait for what comes next!! I loved it!
Date: 06/13/2009 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 3
love the truth spell.
Date: 06/13/2009 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ooh, Xander pissed me off! How dare he? Then try to play it off? Ugh! I really do enjoy having Lawson around, y'all do a great job with him, in my opinion. Thanks for the wonderful fic!
Date: 06/13/2009 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow! Great chapter. Poor Anya, afraid the girls would abandon her. Glad they didn't though!
Date: 06/13/2009 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ya know what I noticed? Sometimes y'all are really sneakily cliffhangery. Yup, I've caught on.;) Wonderful chappie! I loved that the girls let Anya know she wasn't going anywhere...does this mean Ganya's coming? *blush* & I hope the girls, Spike, & Giles give Buffy some self-confidence...or that she comes into her own a little more over the story (when it comes to relationships). ADORED Spike's reaction to his mate...can't wait to see who else is "under his protection". :P