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Reviewer: Tasha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2010 10:53 am Title: Chapter 17, Heavenly Revenge

Wow, that is one heck of a first chapter.  Dang, Mary.  So many lines out on that one to make you wonder what is going on, etc.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2010 11:48 am Title: Chapter 15, Blood Money

wonderful  love this.....

being greedy, more please

Reviewer: sus Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2010 03:09 am Title: Chapter 17, Heavenly Revenge

So good. It'll be hard waiting for this one.

 

 

 

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2010 02:39 am Title: Chapter 17, Heavenly Revenge

Ooh...I like this!  Especially Dawn taking the gang to task over how they screwed up.  Does this mean Dawn will ascend (to higher being status) once she shows them what they did wrong? & I love the idea of Buffy's heaven being too much for Willow to even describe.  I look forward to you starting this one!

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2010 12:08 am Title: Chapter 17, Heavenly Revenge

Now this shows real promise. I cant wait to see what the ramifications of Buffys wish are, and what brought them to that situation in the first place. Hopefully you turn this one into a full fledged story soon.

Reviewer: gopher101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2010 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 7, Power

Wow, intersting.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2010 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 17, Heavenly Revenge

Oh! What was this wish of Buffy's and what consequences happened? I am very interested in finding that out.

Reviewer: Lilladysez Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2010 11:35 am Title: Chapter 8, Conspiracy

Nononononononononononononononononononononononononono

 

You can't leave it there! Pretty please continue this one next, please, please, pretty please!

 

Reviewer: Tasha Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2009 01:03 am Title: Chapter 16, A New Woman

Wow ... a lot of mysteries to solve here.  This would be one heck of a story.  Excellent start.

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2009 08:27 am Title: Chapter 8, Conspiracy

Soooo... what exactly does the Council have planned? I'd love it if you continued this.

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2009 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 16, A New Woman

Interesting...hope it still ends up Spuffy!  So Giles interfered, but I gotta hope Buffy's still alive somehow...since she wasn't w/ Angel, can't wait to find out the truth.  & to see what happens w/ William & Buffy.  & to find out what's up w/ his current woman. :( Great start! :D

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2009 07:23 am Title: Chapter 9, Hurt and Comfort

more and more of this please....its brilliant

Reviewer: Dar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2009 08:28 am Title: Chapter 16, A New Woman

Now that chapter just raised toooo many questions. Need more

Reviewer: Jester_McKay Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2009 02:01 am Title: Chapter 16, A New Woman

This one really, really needs to be continued, please. I have to find out what's happened, if my guess is right!

Reviewer: bemeka Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2009 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 16, A New Woman

This looks interesting, looking forward to what happens next when you get to it

Reviewer: ValidescopeWest Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2009 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 13, Xander's Redemption

I love how this story is going. I hope you decide to continue it soon.

Reviewer: Magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 07:24 am Title: Chapter 8, Conspiracy

This is really good. I like this Buffy. and how things could go from here. I wonder about the Councils plan, that seems like a new thing.

Reviewer: Magnus374 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2009 11:17 am Title: Chapter 3, Little Sister Found

This was a very good scenario, some parts are used in " Memnries Maketh the Man" but I think that I will like this story more. I really like how you made Drusilla, that she cares for Spike and want him to be happy( I want her to be happy to). The interaction between Buffy and Drusilla was also great. This story could be great and I hope you will write it.

Reviewer: Niori Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2009 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 11, Turn the Tide

This is my fav 'first chapter'. And if you do ever further it, you should totally keep it Spike/Buffy/Angel- I have a secret fetish for that threesome. lol. You have real potential with this one- I wanna see how The First has control over the Slayer and Watchers.

Reviewer: Niori Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2009 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 10, The Should Have Been Slayer

Okay, so many of these would make great stories. This one included.

Reviewer: Niori Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2009 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 9, Hurt and Comfort

Wow...another one you should continue. Poor Tara and Spike.

Reviewer: Niori Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2009 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 7, Power

Again with the wanting to see this expanded.

Reviewer: Niori Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2009 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 2, Armed, Fanged, and Dangerous

Another story I would love to see expanded.

Reviewer: Niori Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2009 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 1, A Mirror World

If you ever turn this into a full on story, I'd totally read it.

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2009 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 15, Blood Money

Oh pretty Please!?! Write this one! So much potential. Spuffy/Tara Willow/Angelus. I really do like Wangel(us).

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