Date: 01/24/2010 10:53 am Title: Chapter 17, Heavenly Revenge
Wow, that is one heck of a first chapter. Dang, Mary. So many lines out on that one to make you wonder what is going on, etc.
Date: 01/21/2010 11:48 am Title: Chapter 15, Blood Money
wonderful love this.....
being greedy, more please
Date: 01/20/2010 03:09 am Title: Chapter 17, Heavenly Revenge
So good. It'll be hard waiting for this one.
Date: 01/20/2010 02:39 am Title: Chapter 17, Heavenly Revenge
Ooh...I like this! Especially Dawn taking the gang to task over how they screwed up. Does this mean Dawn will ascend (to higher being status) once she shows them what they did wrong? & I love the idea of Buffy's heaven being too much for Willow to even describe. I look forward to you starting this one!
Date: 01/20/2010 12:08 am Title: Chapter 17, Heavenly Revenge
Now this shows real promise. I cant wait to see what the ramifications of Buffys wish are, and what brought them to that situation in the first place. Hopefully you turn this one into a full fledged story soon.
Date: 01/19/2010 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 7, Power
Wow, intersting.
Date: 01/19/2010 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 17, Heavenly Revenge
Oh! What was this wish of Buffy's and what consequences happened? I am very interested in finding that out.
Date: 01/01/2010 11:35 am Title: Chapter 8, Conspiracy
Nononononononononononononononononononononononononono
You can't leave it there! Pretty please continue this one next, please, please, pretty please!
Date: 12/13/2009 01:03 am Title: Chapter 16, A New Woman
Wow ... a lot of mysteries to solve here. This would be one heck of a story. Excellent start.
Date: 12/12/2009 08:27 am Title: Chapter 8, Conspiracy
Soooo... what exactly does the Council have planned? I'd love it if you continued this.
Date: 12/11/2009 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 16, A New Woman
Interesting...hope it still ends up Spuffy! So Giles interfered, but I gotta hope Buffy's still alive somehow...since she wasn't w/ Angel, can't wait to find out the truth. & to see what happens w/ William & Buffy. & to find out what's up w/ his current woman. :( Great start! :D
Date: 12/11/2009 07:23 am Title: Chapter 9, Hurt and Comfort
more and more of this please....its brilliant
Date: 12/10/2009 08:28 am Title: Chapter 16, A New Woman
Now that chapter just raised toooo many questions. Need more
Date: 12/09/2009 02:01 am Title: Chapter 16, A New Woman
This one really, really needs to be continued, please. I have to find out what's happened, if my guess is right!
Date: 12/08/2009 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 16, A New Woman
This looks interesting, looking forward to what happens next when you get to it
Date: 11/03/2009 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 13, Xander's Redemption
I love how this story is going. I hope you decide to continue it soon.
Date: 10/11/2009 07:24 am Title: Chapter 8, Conspiracy
This is really good. I like this Buffy. and how things could go from here. I wonder about the Councils plan, that seems like a new thing.
Date: 10/06/2009 11:17 am Title: Chapter 3, Little Sister Found
This was a very good scenario, some parts are used in " Memnries Maketh the Man" but I think that I will like this story more. I really like how you made Drusilla, that she cares for Spike and want him to be happy( I want her to be happy to). The interaction between Buffy and Drusilla was also great. This story could be great and I hope you will write it.
Date: 09/29/2009 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 11, Turn the Tide
This is my fav 'first chapter'. And if you do ever further it, you should totally keep it Spike/Buffy/Angel- I have a secret fetish for that threesome. lol. You have real potential with this one- I wanna see how The First has control over the Slayer and Watchers.
Date: 09/29/2009 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 10, The Should Have Been Slayer
Okay, so many of these would make great stories. This one included.
Date: 09/29/2009 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 9, Hurt and Comfort
Wow...another one you should continue. Poor Tara and Spike.
Date: 09/29/2009 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 7, Power
Again with the wanting to see this expanded.
Date: 09/29/2009 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 2, Armed, Fanged, and Dangerous
Another story I would love to see expanded.
Date: 09/29/2009 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 1, A Mirror World
If you ever turn this into a full on story, I'd totally read it.
Date: 09/12/2009 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 15, Blood Money
Oh pretty Please!?! Write this one! So much potential. Spuffy/Tara Willow/Angelus. I really do like Wangel(us).