[Report This]Date: 07/31/2009 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 13, Xander's Redemption
Choke on THAT, you worthless PUS-BAG!!! Three cheers for Anya! {~bows reverently~} What a shame it didn't go that way... (~hits Joss & Marti w/a ball peen hammer, repeatedly!!~) If ever there was proof that Mutant Enemy needed to sign over all rights to you, Mary Perk - it is this one shot right here!
Bravo
LCF
[Report This]Date: 07/31/2009 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 13, Xander's Redemption
LOL Jesse! I saw much potential in the Dude's one and only episode.
[Report This]Date: 07/31/2009 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 12, What Buffy Deserves
LOL Spike is a daddy! Love this. Something of a lover of Father Spike I must say.
Date: 07/31/2009 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 11, Turn the Tide
Oh that is certainly interesting. I wonder what Angel and his crew are up to. Soldiering an army for good.
Date: 07/31/2009 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 10, The Should Have Been Slayer
Oh This is very interesting story. Would make a brilliant one.
Date: 07/31/2009 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 13, Xander's Redemption
Very interesting...a "Jesse survives" fic. I like that both Anya & Xander remember the old reality (a la Cordelia's wish). & I find it kinda funny that everyone's much happier in this reality. :D Can't wait to find out where Xander's been in this reality (to not be friends w/ Buffy). I really like that Buffy didn't sacrifice herself in this reality & that Giles had no question that she would have...had it been necessary. Oh, & I found it cute that Jesse got his girl (Cordelia)...poor li'l playa w/ no game...very interested in finding out how he hooked her. :P
Date: 07/31/2009 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 13, Xander's Redemption
this I like - a vengeance wish that resulted in a more positive reality for everyone but Xander - at least so far. I definitely look forward to this one when you get around to it
Date: 07/31/2009 10:51 am Title: Chapter 13, Xander's Redemption
This should be interesting. It'd be nice to see what happened without Xander's jealousy getting in the way.
[Report This]Date: 07/31/2009 02:54 am Title: Chapter 8, Conspiracy
this seems really interesting. I really hope you continue with this,^_^
Date: 07/31/2009 02:52 am Title: Chapter 12, What Buffy Deserves
You realise you're going to have to finish this one, right? A vengeance justice wish, a Buffy actually admitting her part in the Spuffy crash 'n' burn, & a kid? Can't leave us like that.
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2009 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 12, What Buffy Deserves
Holy cow ... just when I think your ideas can't get any better or cooler ... dang. Nice one.
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2009 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 11, Turn the Tide
Oh my fricking gosh ... that end totally surprised me ... totally. Excellent!!! This would be an awesome story. You could also post this as a one shot too and then do a "Sequel" later. So cool. Loved this one above most of the others even.
Date: 07/30/2009 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 11, Turn the Tide
The Slayers are under the control of the First Evil? That gives lots of possibilities for ways this story could go! I like it.
I must admit that I'm not much for the Spike/Buffy/Angel sandwich. I do love pwps, but I adore plot with my smut, and it's so often missing in stories with the three of them bedding down. Now Willow with Angel could be interesting, but how about Black Magic Willow with Vampire Wes? That has some possibilities. If given my druthers, I think that a pairing of a dominating Nina and Angel would be lots of fun. Can you imagine what Spike would say about a bitch-slapped Angel? I just got a picture of Spike walking into the office and finding Angel bent over his desk being spanked like a bad boy.
I'm looking forward to more of this story; it could have so many twists and turns, and you handle these kinds of stories so well. More, please!
Author's Response:
I doubt very much that this would be a PWP. The plot is too complicated for that kind of thing. There probably wouldn't even be any smut for awhile. I'm still leaning towards B/S/A though. If I do an Angel/Willow pairing, it won't be Dark Willow. More like a Willow who can't figure out what is wrong with her friends. Eh, I never cared for the Nina storyline.
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2009 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 12, What Buffy Deserves
more please
Date: 07/30/2009 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 12, What Buffy Deserves
Aaaahhh, tell us what the kitties need to come up with chapters to go with these wonderful first ones!! I would gladly grow catnip if it is required!
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2009 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 12, What Buffy Deserves
Hi, hi nice, I would love to see how you'll turn this right.
Date: 07/30/2009 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 12, What Buffy Deserves
Ooh...I liked that both Buffy & Dawn brought up Xander's attempted rape...I never liked how that was just brushed aside in canon. Loved Anya granting the wish--I guess she never gave up her powers in this 'verse. Jonathan & Andrew kinda cracked me up w/ their little parts, kinda hope one, or both, stick around for their own redemption. & I liked Willow's surprise that Buffy didn't want her interfering w/ Spike. This'll be very interesting to see how life plays out w/ an adorable Spuffy girl. Oh, & I liked that Buffy & Dawn kinda put claims on Spike, wonder how that'll change things when he returns. Hope the plot kitties show up so you can write this one soon. Any idea which of these stories will be the first up to bat for full story? :D
Author's Response:
This is the end of Season 6 when she's still all vengeancy from Xander dumping her. No clue, but I'm leaning towards One Man's Hell because there's actually time limit on it.
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2009 09:43 am Title: Chapter 12, What Buffy Deserves
Well, now, that is a really darn good first chapter! Rather than a soul he gets a child with Buffy. Question why 6 years old and not a baby? I always felt that Spike felt more when he was 'apparently' unsouled. I love this idea. Oh I can def see why Charlie is pushing for it *giggles*. I'm just wondering about the whole story idea. Is it centered around canon Season 7 but with child? I would love to see where this goes. Can't wait for you to get to these after you finish up some of the WIP's. Just love all of them to bits Mary!
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2009 09:27 am Title: Chapter 11, Turn the Tide
OOH this one is very interesting Mary. All of them are vamps and souled? I loved the banter and the ditzy act Buffy did. So will this be one shot or a bit longer? Another good one Mary!
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2009 01:20 am Title: Chapter 11, Turn the Tide
Could be a fabulous story, but Buffy with others than Spike? I can't see it. I would have loved to read from the start where Dru turned her, maybe in short flashbacks.
Date: 07/30/2009 01:18 am Title: Chapter 10, The Should Have Been Slayer
Ooh, this is interesting. Could we have more than this one, please? I'd love to find out what would happen if Spike finds out Merrick might have been related to him.
Also, if you're taking suggestions, how about a fic where Merrick didn't die & came to Sunnydale with Buffy as her watcher, & Giles (if he's part of the fic) was more backup?
Date: 07/30/2009 12:21 am Title: Chapter 11, Turn the Tide
Whoa...I didn't see the last couple of paragraphs coming.
I'm not usually a fan of the Angel, Buffy, Spike sandwich. Most of them are written for the smut, which I enjoy, but I do like some plot between bonkings. The Angel and Willow pairing might be interesting, but not too plausible unless she is Black Magic Willow. That might well be veeeeeery interesting.
I'd love to see a story with a Nina the Dominatrix werewolf, keeping Angel in line. Imagine what Spike would say about that relationship! He'd be rolling on the floor laughing over a bitch-slapped Angel.
This chapter has the makings of a fantastic story. Please keep giving us more of your chapters!
Date: 07/29/2009 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 11, Turn the Tide
OMG!! Please start writing this now...one-shot or not. & I'll be voting for a Spike/Buffy/Angel pairing...maybe Wes & Gunn could be having their own threesome w/ Fred? Love that they're vamps--can't wait to find out who else might be. & I liked that Angel cast a spell so the new Council didn't know that Spuffy were vampires right away. SUPER LOVED Buffy, Spike, & Angel messing w/ Giles & the gang. Interesting switch in decision-making w/ Cassie dumping Angel, dating Xander, & sacrificing her sister. I adored Spike not wanting Cassie's disloyalties to those she loves to rub off on Buffy. :P & you said the "p" word...I must have more. :D
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2009 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 11, Turn the Tide
ooh an organised Angel and crew!! Ensouled Angel, Wesley , Gunn et al. And thr Suunydale gang being under Thrall to the First Evil, quite a story line.
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2009 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 11, Turn the Tide
Oh My..! They really are "The Fang Gang" now! Interesting twist! So..! Cassie offed her version of Dawn, eh...? (smacks her w/a ball peen hammer!) No wonder The First Evil's healping them... & bonus! Buffy & Spike pulling one over on the sanctamonius Scoobies! {even if they did have to involve the gelled ninny, it was worth it!} (Besides..! only Tara or Anya should be in a Spuffy menage!)
Hope you follow though with this - VampWes AND VampGun..? {along w/ a marginally tolerable Angel} had lots of possibilities for Buffy & Spike! (~offers the plot kitty even more uncut catnip. from Kabul!~)
LCF