[Report This]Date: 07/26/2009 09:32 am Title: Chapter 3, Little Sister Found
Hehe I like that Spike asks Buffy about Dru's old life when he doesn't know.
He must rescue her from Angel 3 times?? That's a lot!
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2009 09:18 am Title: Chapter 2, Armed, Fanged, and Dangerous
Oooh I like this one a lot!! Great concept! I love how the Chinese Watcher cursed Angelus instead of Spike. LOL
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2009 09:12 am Title: Chapter 1, A Mirror World
Funny how Angel is as sanctimonious as a Slayer. He really doesn't like competition...
Hope you write more sometime. :)
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2009 12:50 am Title: Chapter 5, Lost in A Book
Ooo ... VERY good. This has oh so many possibilities. I love it!!! You are the queen of ideas my dear. You truly are.
[Report This]Date: 07/25/2009 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 5, Lost in A Book
Okay I'm really digging the 'Little Sister Found' which is showing shades of 'Memories Maketh the Man', another of your stories I really enjoy. Plus I love just about anything that has Angel seen in a more unforgiving light. And I also enjoy the arc with Drusilla, I think there's major potential to turn her character around... if that's the plan of course and develop a sisterly relationship with Buffy.
I also love 'Lost in a Book' because I am such a HUGE fan of these particular story lines... well as long as they are done properly.. of which I have no doubt yours will be successful. And the Scoobies being force to read it? I CAN'T wait for their reactions... especially Angel. God I hate Angel.
[Report This]Date: 07/25/2009 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 3, Little Sister Found
I'm thoroughly enjoying these "first" chapters. This really intrigues me and I can't wait to see what you do with it.
Date: 07/25/2009 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 5, Lost in A Book
Ooh, I really like this idea! Especially if Angel has to read about Spuffy's escapades (& possibly sexcapades :P) on his own until Giles' return. & was that Dawn in the book? Since she doesn't exist @ this point in time, it'll be interesting to see how she exists in the book. & I always love seeing Spuffy fight others, so some kick ass was definitely good times. :D
Date: 07/25/2009 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 4, Hells Bells
Ooh...fascinating! If Spike's chip is removed or stops working...can he eat Riley? Pretty please?!? :P I like that Xander missed D'Hoffryn screwing w/ his life b/c he did something nice for Spike...maybe it'll lead to a true Xander/Spike friendship. & I also liked that Xander realized Riley could be behind the chip misfiring & that Riley wasn't the long-haul guy. Quite interested in seeing how this plays out. :D
[Report This]Date: 07/25/2009 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 5, Lost in A Book
Mary I love these First Chapter, but the thing is now I'm wanting more and more. This one was really aggravating that it wasn't finished, lol. Loved this muchly! More someday pretty please cherry on top?
Date: 07/25/2009 11:46 am Title: Chapter 4, Hells Bells
Oh Riley, don't you know payback's a Buffy? You don't get away with messing with her vamp. Unless someone only wants to make it look like Riley did it. Someone like perhaps the ubiquitous Council of Wankers who would like to get rid of the Slayer's support group and another group demon hunters who are not under Council control? Or, where does Riley's demon-hunting cadre get its funding, hmmmm? Is the money and materiel from a government, a Council, or even a group of demon lawyers (is that an oxymoron?) that would love to stir up trouble between humans and demons to start a war or apocalypse? This story has so many possibilities that I'm really looking forward to reading more.
Date: 07/25/2009 11:38 am Title: Chapter 5, Lost in A Book
LOL they can read about Spike and buffy's fairy tale romance and adventures
Date: 07/25/2009 11:35 am Title: Chapter 5, Lost in A Book
Ooh, more please! I foresee much messing with Angel's broody head!
Date: 07/25/2009 11:34 am Title: Chapter 3, Little Sister Found
I'm hearing the Twilight Zone music with this one. Please continue it, because this one has the potential to be a fantastic story.
Date: 07/25/2009 11:34 am Title: Chapter 3, Little Sister Found
I LOVE this one!! I would love to read more. Please write more. :)
Date: 07/25/2009 11:32 am Title: Chapter 5, Lost in A Book
This one has possibilities--I like the premise!
Date: 07/25/2009 11:31 am Title: Chapter 2, Armed, Fanged, and Dangerous
Intriguing idea. More please.
Date: 07/25/2009 11:29 am Title: Chapter 4, Hells Bells
OK, this one really does need continuing, please.
Date: 07/25/2009 11:18 am Title: Chapter 5, Lost in A Book
loved it
Date: 07/25/2009 10:57 am Title: Chapter 3, Little Sister Found
I like this one. More please.
[Report This]Date: 07/25/2009 07:48 am Title: Chapter 4, Hells Bells
Oh my gosh ... more more more ... {giggles} This sounds like a MUCH better way for Season 6 to go from here. I am just itching to see what happens next. {Smiles}
[Report This]Date: 07/25/2009 07:44 am Title: Chapter 3, Little Sister Found
Oh my GOSH!!! Ooooo ... you have me all bouncing in my seat wanting more of this one. You know I'll never pressure you because you have to go where the muse is, but I want you to know just how AWESOME of a lead in this is. This would grab just about any reader to want to read more. Awesome, Mary. {huggles}
I wonder who the new daddy will be? Ripper perhaps? There are a couple challenges that it could be. So, I won't go putting too much into the reviews to keep from giving anything possibly away. {winks}
Totally love this one, Mary
Date: 07/25/2009 07:35 am Title: Chapter 2, Armed, Fanged, and Dangerous
Hmm ... very interesting. I really liked this one. I like how each of them got their souls in different ways. Dare I saw that Spike got William's soul back ... or back fully.
P.S. I was reading the reviews for each "first chapter", and it seems like you have hits on your hands. You are giving people enough to whet their appetite, and they are hungry. ROFL. It must be great to be getting feedback like that. At least you always know that your ideas (even if just in thought form) are welcomed.
Date: 07/25/2009 07:12 am Title: Chapter 4, Hells Bells
Veerry interesting! Hope to see more of these stories in the near future! Thanks for sharing your wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: 07/24/2009 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 4, Hells Bells
MARY! That's just cruel to end it there LOL! I got sooooo into this! Wow I loved how they seemed to bond! Oh god I don't know whether or not to cry or gasp in horror or shock or stand their in utter devastation. Wow such a great cliffie!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07/24/2009 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 3, Little Sister Found
How absolutely fascinating. I'm looking forward to this story!