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Reviewer: clarityfades Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2009 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 3, Little Sister Found

OMG...I freakin' love this!  Can't wait to see the rest of the story.  Buffy & Dru as sisters...my fave part of this whole idea.  Great stuff.

Reviewer: spike_lizard Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2009 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 3, Little Sister Found

oh i am just loving this one i can not wait for more

Reviewer: girlie18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2009 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 3, Little Sister Found

I liked it...I wonder what you ment by new daddy?

Reviewer: Spikelissa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2009 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 3, Little Sister Found

Oh my freaking god!!!!! Mary I looooooooooove this one!  Omigod!  WOW!  I hope someday soon you continue!  I love how you started this!  It looks very very promising!  I even got teary eyed with the Dru/Buffy scenes.  Remarkable First Chapter!

Reviewer: Darknight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2009 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 2, Armed, Fanged, and Dangerous

Oh this is very interesting. Great set up for a new story when you get time.

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Date: 07/23/2009 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1, A Mirror World

I really would love for this to be written it is very cool Idea for a story.

Reviewer: peck Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2009 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 2, Armed, Fanged, and Dangerous

Another hit on your hands, Spike will still have trouble but not be conflicted with love for his Sire.

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2009 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 2, Armed, Fanged, and Dangerous

I remember reading this challenge @ EF...interesting idea.  I think the cast list would be very helpful--love how Angel AND Spike got their souls, & I liked seeing the bits of Angel/Spike canon we know twisted a bit.  One question...from the way Spike talked on the submarine...does Drusilla have her soul?  If so, it might be good to show us how she got it.



Author's Response:

No, Drusilla doesn't have her soul, but she's with Angel.

Reviewer: spike_lizard Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2009 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 2, Armed, Fanged, and Dangerous

like this one also i wonder who is mate will be



Author's Response:

I write Spuffy, Lizard.

Reviewer: spike_lizard Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2009 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 1, A Mirror World

love this can't wait for more

Reviewer: anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2009 10:21 am Title: Chapter 2, Armed, Fanged, and Dangerous

This one please!!! This chapter even souonds like it could be another beginning for one of the Immortal Champion series. I'll be waiting for more of this one.

Thank you for putting up these first chapthers. It's a great idea.

Reviewer: girlie18 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2009 08:30 am Title: Chapter 2, Armed, Fanged, and Dangerous

I liked the beginning...i think the story that follows will be interesting.

Reviewer: Spikelissa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2009 08:04 am Title: Chapter 2, Armed, Fanged, and Dangerous

Damn Mary!  Love this First chapter!!!  Omg the bunnies came out for this first chapter but no others plotted.  Damn bunnies!!!!  I hope you can someday finish this, it definitely looks very promising and the idea - blows my mind!  Love it!!!!!

Reviewer: Spikelissa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2009 07:53 am Title: Chapter 1, A Mirror World

OOOh one more thing!  Who is Buffy's Sire?  So loving this hopes and begs your muse/bunnies to cooperate!!!!!  Damn them, lol!

Reviewer: Spikelissa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2009 07:48 am Title: Chapter 1, A Mirror World

Oh me likes!!!!!!!!  Definitely, would so read this!  I love the twist and how you took what Angel said to Buffy to have a normal life and actually had him as a human Slayer still saying it, but in reference to himself.  Brilliant Mary.  I would continue this as something in between if you are having trouble's with bunnies...or are you having bunny troubles getting to the next chapter with this one? 

I absolute love this one!  Did you discuss this idea on c-box lol.  I hope you get this one going into more detail.  Btw - love the idea of First Chapters.  It's sort of like Scenes without a Story but not.  Does this mean these will actually at some point be published and get finished?  Like I said - Brilliant idea!

Reviewer: Pamela Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2009 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 1, A Mirror World

Score!  I can't wait to read more.  As usual you've concocted a wonderful story!  Thanks again.

With kind regards,

Pamela

Reviewer: HermioneSparta Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2009 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 1, A Mirror World

Oh, I love it! Please continue!

Reviewer: peck Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2009 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1, A Mirror World

Ooooh interesting, so many twists on the original characters.  Really needs to be continued!

Reviewer: girlie18 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2009 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 1, A Mirror World

loved it...hopefully there'll be more!!

Reviewer: Tasha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2009 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 1, A Mirror World

I'm so glad you liked the idea, Mary, for the First Chapters.  This is an awesome first chapter too.  It's a really cool mirror world.  I LOVE it already.  Can't wait to get to beta this whenever you end up having a chance (or muse) to flush it out further.  {Grins}

Reviewer: Pam Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2009 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1, A Mirror World

I'd love to read this story.

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2009 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 1, A Mirror World

Excellent first chappie...I can't wait for this story to be written.  I like the idea of Riley already being in play as an extra Slayer...& that Angel is playing the girls--makes me wonder what will happen when Cordelia & Willow find out.  Somehow I think that whatever Willow does, Cordelia's revenge will be worse.  & I'm liking the Buffy/Xander Buffy/Oz connection, maybe Oz can meet Buffy in L.A.  & I absolutely love the idea that Dru made Spike for Buffy all along.

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