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Summary:

Tasha suggested that I post some of my first chapters.  This way you can see what I have planned for the future and respond to what sounds good.  Each chapter will be the working title of the fic.  I will try to put up a summary too.


Categories: All Seasons
Characters: Ensemble
Genre: Drama
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Language
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40063 Read Count: 18036
[Report This] Published: 07/22/2009 Updated: 05/27/2013
Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 07/24/2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3, Little Sister Found

OMG...I freakin' love this!  Can't wait to see the rest of the story.  Buffy & Dru as sisters...my fave part of this whole idea.  Great stuff.

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 07/25/2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4, Hells Bells

Ooh...fascinating!  If Spike's chip is removed or stops working...can he eat Riley?  Pretty please?!? :P  I like that Xander missed D'Hoffryn screwing w/ his life b/c he did something nice for Spike...maybe it'll lead to a true Xander/Spike friendship.  & I also liked that Xander realized Riley could be behind the chip misfiring & that Riley wasn't the long-haul guy.  Quite interested in seeing how this plays out. :D

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 07/25/2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5, Lost in A Book

Ooh, I really like this idea!  Especially if Angel has to read about Spuffy's escapades (& possibly sexcapades :P) on his own until Giles' return.  & was that Dawn in the book?  Since she doesn't exist @ this point in time, it'll be interesting to see how she exists in the book.  & I always love seeing Spuffy fight others, so some kick ass was definitely good times. :D

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 07/26/2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6, One Man's Hell (Posted Under Same Title)

Very intriguing...I definitely want to see more of this!  One quick question, will this story flash back & forth between their original dimension (ie: the one w/ the wrong Buffy taken from Heaven--can't wait to see what happened there, btw!  Ya know, w/ the weirdness & whatever's up w/ Willow) & Spuffy & Illyria's new dimension?  I'm also glad to know Wesley's alive in their new dimension & that Illyria wants to find him.  Always thought they'd make a fearsome (& fun!) foursome. :D

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 07/27/2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7, Power

Okay, I have no clue what's going on, but I like it that way!!  I see what you mean about the complicated plot kitty--I look forward to seeing how this detangles itself.  Buffy as Giles' mom? (Or possibly the mother of the slayer line?)  Spike & William?  Yummy!  Wonderful idea.

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 07/27/2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8, Conspiracy

"These guys are going to be too busy planning an intervention to be any fun."  I gotta see how this story plays out!  It reminds me of "Careless Memories" but w/ a more self-aware Buffy.  I hope this is a story that sees fruition (or @ least a few starter chapters) soon!  I really, really like Buffy initiating her friendship w/ Tara & making sure Anya feels a part of things.  Two of my fave Scoobies *sigh*...& the letter to Spike--Spuffy lovin' is a'comin'! :P

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 07/28/2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9, Hurt and Comfort

Such a sad & horrible start...but what an interesting ending.  I liked that both Buffy & Dawn had decided to treat Spike better after he proved Tara was human, before they found Spara in the alley.  Possible threesome situation between Buffy, Spike, & Tara?  I could really go for that.  Even if that's not the case, I still wanna read more.  Any idea when some of these ideas may see the light of day? :D

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 07/29/2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10, The Should Have Been Slayer

Ooh...quite interesting.  One question, if Buffy didn't get stronger when Merrick met her, how is she the Slayer now?  Or is she just a potential?  I wonder how Cassie got the power of the Slayers--spell, perhaps?  Or something more diabolical?  Can't wait to find out.  Really lovin' Spike & Buffy meeting now, so no preconceived notions about each other.  & I like that Spike told Buffy about his soul, but not Giles.  & yay for Tara!  I always love seeing her. :D

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 07/29/2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11, Turn the Tide

OMG!!  Please start writing this now...one-shot or not.  & I'll be voting for a Spike/Buffy/Angel pairing...maybe Wes & Gunn could be having their own threesome w/ Fred?  Love that they're vamps--can't wait to find out who else might be.  & I liked that Angel cast a spell so the new Council didn't know that Spuffy were vampires right away.  SUPER LOVED Buffy, Spike, & Angel messing w/ Giles & the gang.  Interesting switch in decision-making w/ Cassie dumping Angel, dating Xander, & sacrificing her sister.  I adored Spike not wanting Cassie's disloyalties to those she loves to rub off on Buffy. :P  & you said the "p" word...I must have more. :D

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 07/30/2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12, What Buffy Deserves

Ooh...I liked that both Buffy & Dawn brought up Xander's attempted rape...I never liked how that was just brushed aside in canon.  Loved Anya granting the wish--I guess she never gave up her powers in this 'verse.  Jonathan & Andrew kinda cracked me up w/ their little parts, kinda hope one, or both, stick around for their own redemption.  & I liked Willow's surprise that Buffy didn't want her interfering w/ Spike.  This'll be very interesting to see how life plays out w/ an adorable Spuffy girl.  Oh, & I liked that Buffy & Dawn kinda put claims on Spike, wonder how that'll change things when he returns.  Hope the plot kitties show up so you can write this one soon.  Any idea which of these stories will be the first up to bat for full story? :D



Author's Response:

This is the end of Season 6 when she's still all vengeancy from Xander dumping her.  No clue, but I'm leaning towards One Man's Hell because there's actually time limit on it.

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 07/31/2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13, Xander's Redemption

Very interesting...a "Jesse survives" fic.  I like that both Anya & Xander remember the old reality (a la Cordelia's wish).  & I find it kinda funny that everyone's much happier in this reality. :D  Can't wait to find out where Xander's been in this reality (to not be friends w/ Buffy).  I really like that Buffy didn't sacrifice herself in this reality & that Giles had no question that she would have...had it been necessary.  Oh, & I found it cute that Jesse got his girl (Cordelia)...poor li'l playa w/ no game...very interested in finding out how he hooked her. :P

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 08/01/2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14, A Christmas Fic (Posted Under Title: Christmas Comes Early)

Oooh...I like.  I squinted real hard & saw the connection.  I hope this doesn't get pushed to the backburner for too much longer. :D  I especially liked the different versions of Spike coming together w/ super-future Spike doling out the advice. :P  & bye Drusilla, don't let the door hit ya in the butt as you leave. LOL

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 08/23/2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15, Blood Money

Ooh...me likey! :P  Love the idea of Spuffy/Tara...always have, so I can't wait to see how that relationship developed.  & I really like Angelus & the idea of he & Spike being equals.  Hmm...if Kennedy's the Slayer who killed Dru, does that mean Spangelus will be getting some rather torturous revenge?  I hope so! :P  & Willow/Angelus sounds interesting...I don't usually like anyone w/ Angel(us) except Buffy & Dru, but the way this is starting intrigues me.

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 12/11/2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16, A New Woman

Interesting...hope it still ends up Spuffy!  So Giles interfered, but I gotta hope Buffy's still alive somehow...since she wasn't w/ Angel, can't wait to find out the truth.  & to see what happens w/ William & Buffy.  & to find out what's up w/ his current woman. :( Great start! :D

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 01/20/2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17, Heavenly Revenge

Ooh...I like this!  Especially Dawn taking the gang to task over how they screwed up.  Does this mean Dawn will ascend (to higher being status) once she shows them what they did wrong? & I love the idea of Buffy's heaven being too much for Willow to even describe.  I look forward to you starting this one!

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 01/26/2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18, Spuffy/Faith for Brett

Ooh...very interesting!  & a good place for a Spuffy/Faith relationship to form. Can't wait to see this one fleshed out, especially w/ Spike & Faith having their eyes on Kennedy & her trying to be in charge.  & I liked the surprise kisses between Fuffy & Spuffy/Faith.  I'm excited to see this one come to fruition. :)

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 10/14/2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19, Arcania

I never played this game, but the story sounds intriguing! :D

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 06/11/2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20, Drabble start for To the Victor sequel: Tasha and Smite

Go Tasha!  LOL  Can't wait for this sequel...but does it mean it'll come before the Vengeance in Mine, Baby sequel?  I've been waiting for that one for quite a while!  Hope the muse allows lots of updates to all your WIPs!  Here's some chocolate for the muse & some carrot cake for the plot bunnies to help things out. ;)

Just the Foreplay by maryperk Rated: Adult Only starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Set Post Chosen in ATS5.  Spike, Buffy, and Fred bond over ice cream.


Categories: Angel Season 5
Characters: Buffy, Fred, Spike
Genre: Fluffy/Comedy, Romance
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Spuffy Moresome
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2363 Read Count: 576
[Report This] Published: 07/24/2009 Updated: 07/24/2009
Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 07/24/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Spuffy smut w/ a side of Fred?  How can I not love it?!?  Great one-shot, I liked the Fred POV & that @ the end Buffy felt complete.

Faith, Watching by maryperk Rated: Adult Only starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Faith finds something interesting to watch.


Categories: Post NFA
Characters: Buffy, Faith, Spike
Genre: PWP
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Situations, Spuffy Moresome
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1108 Read Count: 872
[Report This] Published: 08/20/2009 Updated: 08/20/2009
Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 08/20/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bwahahaha!!  I love that it was all a Spuffy ploy for some Faith lovin'!!  & I loved Faith's internal thoughts about Spuffy while they're indulging in shower sex.  That was hot w/ a nice li'l twist @ the end...great job!

Summary:

The Initiative is gone from Sunnydale and the Sultana-Aurelius clan have a new problem to face on the horizon.  This story follows Season 5 with the Sultana twist.


Categories: Buffy Season 5
Characters: None
Genre: Action/Adventure, Romance
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: The Immortal Guardian Series
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27484 Read Count: 9114
[Report This] Published: 08/20/2009 Updated: 08/29/2016
Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 08/20/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Yes, I EEEEEEE'd like a fangirl when I saw this in my mailbox. :D  Yay, Book 2!!  Seriously, I look forward to seeing how season 5 takes place w/ the Sultana-Buffy.  & I loved that Anqet was the one clouding the seers of the baddies.  Stupid sect!  I'll enjoy seeing them go down...but since it's across dimensions, does that mean the dimension-hopping IG's will be the ones to vanquish the sect?  I can be patient (kinda). :P  Great start, & of course, I loved the Spuffy flirtiness--hope they get Joyce to the doctor soon.

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 10/07/2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1, Dracula meets the Sultana

Great chappie!  Dang, Riley just doesn't know when to leave well enough alone, does he?  Wonder what will happen to him, b/c I don't see him changing his obsessive ways.  Though I liked the tiny hint of Graham, adore him!  & I loved Buffy's reaction to Dracula--totally cracked me up.  & his discombobulation @ not being able to enter Spuffy's home gave me a giggle as well.  Love how Buffy dealt w/ him when she woke up in his castle--can't wait to see what she does to Riley for tazing her.  & I liked that Drac felt remorse & wanted to work in his own neck of the woods w/ his brides to do good.  Maybe he'll be a help against Glory later?  That could be very interesting.  & Dawn's 18?  Kinda weird that she's older than canon.  I'm assuming that was done to hook her up w/ Lawson, based on Buffy's comments.  Too bad Tara's in a triad w/ Willow & Oz in this story...I like the idea of Tara/Lawson.

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 02/03/2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2, It's Really Me

Yay for updates!! :-P I really liked that Harmony reminded Lawson of his sister & that Harmony totally wants Brian...can't wait to see how she gets him! LOL & I really enjoyed Lawson & Brian looking out for Harmony & had a good laugh when she wanted to snag the unicorn before dealing w/ the dead body.  & I'm liking seeing everyone work together to protect the clan & Dawn.  I'm a little surprised she's already 18, given canon.  But I guess if you're going to pair her w/ Lawson, it'll be nice for her to be legal (it's just a little odd to see the age difference between Buffy & Dawn reduced all of the sudden).  I did like that Buffy seems to have gotten a hang of her "flash of light" powers & used them to get rid of Doc.  I get the feeling we haven't seen the last of the Docs, though. & yay for Giles' new job!!  Loved the teasing Buffy gave to Giles...& nice add-in w/ the Spinal Tap reference. LOVE that movie! LOL  Great chappie, more soon please!



Author's Response:

Dawn being 18 is Dee's fault.  LOL

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 06/28/2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3, No Replacement Here

Ooh...Immortal Guardians update!  Yay!  Happy me. :D  Great chapter!  I really liked Buffy critiquing the fight scenes in the kung-fu movie, & Xander commenting that Willow does the same thing w/ movies w/ witches in them.  & I'm loving seeing Graham somewhat involved in the group--can't help hoping Riley leaves town & Graham stays to become one of the companions.  Xander's got his soldier memories, but someone who actually IS military may be useful (kinda like the Uxia demons).  & HAHAHAHAHA!  Riley got hit w/ Toth's splitter wand (that's what I've always called it-LOL).  Couldn't have happened to a more annoying guy. :D  & seeing the reactions of the two Rileys made me laugh.  Hmm...& is Riley's new (sorta) interest in recycling the way Buffy's "light" @ Drac's castle changed him?  So he's more concerned about others & the planet than himself?  Can't wait to find out--once he's been put back together, that is. Hee!  This was fun, thanks. :)

Reviewer: clarityfades Signed
Date: 10/14/2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4, Out of My Mind

I'd say "Poor Riley", but I don't feel that badly for him!  Hee!  Still glad he was the one hit by Toth's rod instead of one of the Scoobies.  & ooh, I like that Cordy told the Sunnydale gang about Angel thinking he saw Darla.  THAT should keep some of the LA craziness from happening.  & I'm loving Graham, I hope he sticks around for a long time. :D